Indulge [One Shot]

[mereblackwords]

Title: Indulge 
Pairing: Kaisoo 
Genre: AU, Angst or so
Rating: Nc-17
Length: ~1,400 w

Summary: This is just another story that begins with an aubade of gentle crescendos and ends with the diminuendo of a cruel serenade. A story about art, its creators and their muse.

A/N: This is totally raw and I'm way too tired to read through it, so I

Comments

[beefballs]

this was so intense omg
and your wording is gorgeous ;;;;

[mereblackwords]

haha thank you very much! ^^

[mereblackwords]

...fantastic baby.

Thank you very very much! I'm glad you liked it.^^

[cxxarpexxd]

You left me utterly breathless. I don't know what to say, or just how to say what I feel after reading this story, it's just so intense in its own simplicity of plot that had said so much in so little events. I adore the way you described Jongin, it's just so...vivid, a perfect transition of human nature and emotion from reality to paper, in a sense, and it's simply...stunning. The way he is cocky, arrogant, it's just something that gives this story a chilly vibe, yet at the same time it makes it inexplicably stunning. And especially your choice of words and writing style, it's precious, too precious for me to say how enthralled I am by it

[mereblackwords]

Wow. I don't even know what else I can say to this other than "I don't feel like I deserve so much praise" and "Thank you so much" and "wow".

I have to thank you though, for reading and for leaving probably the best comment in history. I was actually pretty insecure about this one, because I've practically written it over night without any thought to it at all. But while writing, I think I experienced something like I finally found my style or much rather like Jongin in the story: The way to write so I will like my own story. So I think there can surely be more stuff like this expected in future. :))

[cxxarpexxd]

You flatter me >.<

But really, no, this is a stunning piece because of all the emotion put into it. It's not mindlessly, poorly written, it's realistic, especially Jongin. I am in love with this story.
Plus, a flawless writing style. I take my hat off to you.

[mereblackwords]

I'm really glad you like it. Thank you again. You encouraged me greatly to write more. x)

[futago_u]

Am definitely loving this piece even though it's only a one shot T_T. Intense, descriptive words, so vivid indeed. Keep it up, hope to read more KaiSoo from you :D. hehehehe

[mereblackwords]

Haha I feel sorry it came out to be so short. xD Thank you! I definitely will! ^^

[xoeishi]

That was so beautifully written ;______;
I don't even know what to say, the story it's self is honestly like a work of art.
It was so short but it stuck to me. I absolutely loved Jongin and how Kyungsoo was like this living canvas for him. genius.
I can't explain it properly ;;;

[mereblackwords]

OMG I FORGOT TO RESERVE A SPOT FOR YOU!! T___T

Such a sweet comment again! OTL
I don't know how to deal with so much praise. lol

Well... I guess I just wrote this at a time when I just felt inspired to write. x)