Amber Orbs [One Shot]

Oct 17, 2012 16:49

Title: Amber Orbs
Pairing: Yunjae
Genre: Smut
Rating: NC-17

Summary: It's the look in his eyes; flickering darkness, an abyss of fire.

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genre: mature content, genre: smut, pairing: yunho/jaejoong, lenght: one shot

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rise_as5_nine October 17 2012, 17:32:42 UTC
wow. that was intense!!! really good!

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mereblackwords October 17 2012, 17:52:54 UTC
Pleasure to please! Man I was dying to finally write some Yunjae! xD

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ultamatempa October 17 2012, 18:07:33 UTC
the best kind of torment ever

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mereblackwords October 17 2012, 18:10:05 UTC
Absolutely agreed.

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shin_ah_mi October 17 2012, 21:08:44 UTC
my insides twisted too!!!!!
good work!!!
yubjae smexytime is HOT

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mereblackwords October 17 2012, 21:10:29 UTC
trolololol Thanks! I shall write more tvxq stuff from now on!

You can also drop a request for dbsk stuff in my ask if you want! :))

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summertangerine October 18 2012, 00:13:48 UTC
the intensity of everything is such a stark contrast to the soft kiss near the end of the fic, but i welcome that contrast. that, and yunho's desire to fall over the edge together makes this piece feel like love-- not the love that people talk about (aka rainbows, sparkles, unicorns) but the more lustful and animalistic side of it.

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mereblackwords October 18 2012, 01:27:36 UTC
Yes! That's the feeling I wanted to get across. I think it's a side of love (especially in longterm relationships) that isn't being writen about often. With that kind of feeling in mind I just started writting and yeah... This happened. Lol

Thanks for the lovely comment! ^.^

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summertangerine October 18 2012, 01:31:17 UTC
/sobs/ please write more of those then. tbh it's that aspect of love that i like the most, because i think that that's when the two people in love have the utmost trust in each other-- they're willing to lose themselves within each other. ;~~~;

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mereblackwords October 18 2012, 01:45:44 UTC
I can't agree more! I think that is the most mature love of all and also the most realistic one. It's the kind of love you notice each other's flaws and get annoyed by them but you are willing to accept them as a part of the other because the urge to be close is much stronger. If that made sense... xD

I'm planing to! There's also a chaptered Yunjae fic in my head that just needs to be put into words. So you anticipat! ^^ <3

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dilovesyunjae October 18 2012, 08:14:09 UTC
that was soooooooo hot. So how many rounds did they have?? *fans self*

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mereblackwords October 18 2012, 08:40:57 UTC
Oh you know, once Yunho's fired up there's no tomorrow.

Thanks for reading!

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