Flash Challenge Spaiku

Nov 06, 2008 21:35

For this week's fantas_magoria "School Hard" Flash Challenge: "Spike has fought two Slayers in the last century, and... he's killed them both." says Giles. Write a haiku poem for each of those incidents.
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two spaiku: two slayers )

phantasmagoria challenge, btvs:spike, spaiku, btvs: s5

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snowpuppies November 7 2008, 03:56:35 UTC
Nice progression.

Spike becomes himself
by drinking the blood of the
girls who are Chosen.

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mere_ubu November 7 2008, 04:25:21 UTC
Nice haiku!

And thank you. :D

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snowpuppies November 7 2008, 04:35:48 UTC
:P

Sorry. I've got a thing going on in my journal...everything comes out in haiku. *headdesk*

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mere_ubu November 7 2008, 04:42:44 UTC
*lol*

Harmless addiction,
this five by seven by five . . .
embrace the haiku!

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rebcake November 7 2008, 03:58:53 UTC
Wow! Excellent. The second one perfectly captures what this kill gave to Spike: identity.

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mere_ubu November 7 2008, 04:03:43 UTC
Thank you, darlin. And OMG! *hands* I actually turned on the laptop to FB your fabulous seasonal_spuffy contribution and was sidetracked by haiku. *lol* They talked fancy to me with their flash challenge! I'll not be thwarted any longer. :D

::runs away to comment::

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eowyn_315 November 7 2008, 04:03:54 UTC
Yay! I saw the flash challenge and immediately thought of you. :) Nice ones.

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mere_ubu November 7 2008, 04:27:27 UTC
Hee! Thank you--I'm flattered. I was supposed to be working on my seasonal_spuffy entry, but I found the siren call of the flash challenge irresistible.

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cindergal November 7 2008, 04:10:00 UTC
Spike finds his calling. Nice.

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mere_ubu November 7 2008, 04:28:56 UTC
Thank you, ma'am!

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velvetwhip November 7 2008, 04:42:10 UTC
Is there any point?
One dies the next is chosen
Spike seems quite a fool

Gabrielle

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*points at your icon, dies* mere_ubu November 7 2008, 04:47:42 UTC
Inappropriate:
abandoning oneself to
icon hysterics.

Also? Your haiku rawks. :D

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Re: *points at your icon, dies* velvetwhip November 7 2008, 04:53:34 UTC
Spike is insecure
It's a common male problem
Size...it matters *sigh*

Glad to make you giggle!

Gabrielle

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Heee! You're funny. mere_ubu November 7 2008, 05:05:10 UTC
Buffy contradicts
with a Slayer's conviction:
it's scythe that matters.

Whoa. Haiku and puns. I'm going to hell for sure now. Also? I feel kinda dizzy.

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