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mercy2908

Longing to Belong - Chapter 24

Jun 04, 2016 21:05

Chapter 24

Birch Creek, July 2003

Louise scratched her head for the third time in a row. ( Read more... )

longing to belong

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lalaith_paola June 5 2016, 20:54:25 UTC

Soooo...the misterious Rachel's oldest son is Kid ( ... )

mercy2908 June 6 2016, 21:00:25 UTC

Yes, Rachel's eldest son is Kid. I wasn't sure if I wanted to reveal his identity yet, but in the end I decided that I should give him away. As you know, Lou is twelve and Kid is eighteen, but these two will grow into adulthood, so that is where we will have our romance. However, some things will happen when Kid visits that might have some kind of repercussion for their future.
Yes, I also feel sorry for Lou because in her child's mind she doesn't understand why her father and Rachel have to marry. She hates the idea of living with these two teenagers, and she's not very fond of Rachel yet. Even so, she is proving to be more mature than what is expected from a girl her age. She could be difficult and contrary, but she has decided to hide her feelings.

Thanks a lot!!! Kid won't appear yet. He's still travelling, now in Italy, so there will be more chapters to read before we see Kid in the flesh.

lalaith_paola June 6 2016, 21:42:04 UTC

LOL...I forgot to tell you about the Italy's refernce,thank you for the little nod to my hometown!

BTW... If Kid's in Rome and needs a guide...I'll be happy to help him!! ^_^

mercy2908 June 7 2016, 08:08:52 UTC

I'm sure Kid would love a guide as nice as you. The problem is that you'd need to travel back in time. This happened in 2003, thirteen years ago. LOL