Longing to Belong - Chapter 17

Apr 15, 2016 20:13

Chapter 17

Birch Creek, September 2002

Teaspoon drummed his fingers on the rugged surface of his work desk as he nervously waited for the clicking sound that meant that the person on the other end of the line had taken the call. ( Read more... )

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lalaith_paola April 17 2016, 21:02:35 UTC
Hi Mercy!
Sorry I sort of disappeared but my pc broke (it was 10 years old!) and I had been so busy at work (working in the evening and also on sunday -_-) that I didn't had the time to check this website. Yesterday I was finally able to buy a new laptop and therefore today I'm catching up with whethever I've lost!

Rachel! She's so forward! But I understand, if she's feeling that kissing Teaspoon was right, then she did well acting upon her feelings. They were adults after all, and she would be prepared to deal with a no, better than a awkward teenager.

I'm sorry that her and Henry love story ended in a divorce, because I Always thought that in the show their story was quite romantic; but I'm glad Rachel is still good friend with her ex-husband.

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mercy2908 April 18 2016, 08:34:30 UTC
Hi Paola!
Sorry you had problems with your PC, but don't worry. I only posted this chapter on Friday.
Yes, Rachel is quite forward, but I think she's not very different from the character in the show. I found Rachel quite bold, especially in her relationships with men.
As for Henry, well, I think that in this story Rachel and Henry also had a good story. They had three children! The thing is that in the show Henry died very young, and I have the impression that he and Rachel hadn't been married for long. So we don't know if the marriage will have worked or not. In any case, I needed Rachel fancy-free but with children, so the husband should be out of the picture.
Thanks!!!

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