Oh little stubborn, brave Lou!! That's so like her to not follow the rules and do as she think is right! This chapter brought a smile to my face, despite not having a really happy matter. But, well, Teaspoon is getting better so all is well. And yay for Noah! I'm happy to see him, whether is presence will be a cameo or not! ;-)
I wanted to add something that showed that Lou is not simply a sad child, but the spunky character based on the show. I think Louise has two sides: she can be sweet and tender-hearted, and because of her circumstances, sad, but at the same time, she can be difficult and pig-headed. So I wanted to show that this side is also part of her. Teaspoon is getting better, but this episode will suppose a big change, which will bring new things. As for Noah, I'm not sure if he'll appear again. I added him here as the nice taxi driver because I needed someone to fill in this part, and I don't have any plans for him. Maybe he'll come in handy later, but so far, I have no idea what else to do with him. The others will appear soon. In chapter 16 new characters will appear, which I hope will fill this so-far colourless canvas. :) Thanks a lot
I don't think your story is a coulorless canvas! You've focused these first chapters to introduce the main characters and I didn't get bored buy them! You did a good job and made them interesting! And, btw, Lou and Papa Teaspoon are too cute together! ^_^
Thank you, Paola. I'm glad you don't find the story too bland. In any case, not all the main characters have been introduced. There are some important characters who will appear little by little. In the next chapter, which I'm writing now, a very important character will appear. :) Thanks a lot!!!
how daring of Lou to wander on her own like this. and I agree with Emma - she should not be rewarded for that, but how can you stand between a girl and her daddy?...
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This chapter brought a smile to my face, despite not having a really happy matter. But, well, Teaspoon is getting better so all is well.
And yay for Noah! I'm happy to see him, whether is presence will be a cameo or not! ;-)
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Teaspoon is getting better, but this episode will suppose a big change, which will bring new things.
As for Noah, I'm not sure if he'll appear again. I added him here as the nice taxi driver because I needed someone to fill in this part, and I don't have any plans for him. Maybe he'll come in handy later, but so far, I have no idea what else to do with him.
The others will appear soon. In chapter 16 new characters will appear, which I hope will fill this so-far colourless canvas. :)
Thanks a lot
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You've focused these first chapters to introduce the main characters and I didn't get bored buy them! You did a good job and made them interesting!
And, btw, Lou and Papa Teaspoon are too cute together! ^_^
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Thanks a lot!!!
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Glad Teaspoon is okay.
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Thanks a lot
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