Served Cold | Chapter 21

[mercury_pheonix]

Title: Served Cold
Author: mercury_pheonix 
Fandom: Torchwood/Doctor Who
Genre: Hurt/Comfort, Children of Earth Fix-It.
Characters: Jack Harkness, Ianto Jones, Gray, The Eleventh Doctor, Amy Pond, Rory Williams, Alonso Frame
Pairings: Jack/Ianto, Amy/Rory, Jack/Alonso, Ianto/Gray (one-sided, non-con)
Ratings/Warnings: R - sex, rape, abuse, torture.
Spoilers: All

Comments

[reddevilpoes]

Thank the gods for Rory and Amy. But why does the Tardis let this happen?

[firefly124]

Good instinct, Jack. Not-talking is what has let things get this far out of control

[iolo1234]

OMG this is so hard to read and yet so compelling. Poor Jack worrying about Ianto, poor Ianto handing himself over and is Gray really out - where's the Doctor. And Rory - I love Rory.
This government and education - ridiculous. I know I would never have gone these days.

[candi_apple_red]

Updates of any kind are good. Hope is very good.

An explanation as to why a 900+ year old Time Lord, a nurse, a bright red-head, and a sentient ship all neglected to make sure the (proven) highly dangerous psychopath wasn't properly secured would be fantastic. I want to smack somebody, but I haven't decided who. Probably the Doctor; I frequently want to smack him.

[specialfaiths]

I agree with all the smart commenters before me: as long as you're updating I'm happy ^^

Poor everybody in this chapter :( It's strange to think that the Doctor is somewhere in the TARDIS completely oblivious to the things happening with his companions (...or is he?)