[ OKHC ] Behind His Eyes - Oneshot

Sep 25, 2007 16:19



Title: Behind His Eyes
Rating: R
Word Count: 1046
Pairing: Tamaki x Kaoru, one-sided Hikaru x Kaoru
Warnings: PWP-ish. Comfort sex. Angst and yet kind of fluffy at the end. Kind of rambling-ish. Random POV switching…only read if you’re willing to put up with some lack of coherency.
Summary: Kaoru is breaking.
Author’s Notes: I can’t believe ( Read more... )

ouran, tamakao

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jllai_smile September 25 2007, 22:50:35 UTC
wowowowowowowowowowowowwwww

;__________;

It's been sooo long since you've written anything!! Well, anything that you've posted, that is. *tackle glomp* I've missed your amazing writing very much!!

askldfjasldkf

Omg.

Tamaki x Kaoru.

Omg xD

Evenn though I'm a hardcore twincest fan, holycrapthisissoomghot.

I sooo loved how mature you made Tamaki seem in this story! ANDDD, how you've cunningly sneaked in an underlying message from Tamaki to Kyouya.

“Change can be good,”

Guh, I loved that line.

Dudeeeee, you're sooo amazing. *_____*;;;;;

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mercurial_flux September 26 2007, 04:49:26 UTC
Thank you! -is teh glomped-

Yeah. Tamaki x Kaoru. I have no clue what compelled me to write this, I'm a hardcore Hikaru x Kaoru fan...

But those two are cute and romantic, so I gave it a shot. I'm glad you like it. x33

Hmm, what might the subtle message to Kyouya signify? I think I'm missing something ;___;

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jllai_smile September 26 2007, 12:02:16 UTC
LOL whoops.

i meant tamaki and kaoru.

seeee lol my fingers type on their own and it went on typing my other otp: tamaki x kyouya xDDDD ahaha i feel like an idiot now rofl rofl.

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trojan September 26 2007, 01:17:47 UTC
I...

...MARRY ME.

MARRY ME.

AND BEAR MY CHILDREN. ♥♥

WAIT UNTIL MY TAMAKI READS THIS IT MAY CALL FOR ME TO PLAN SOME SEX *A*

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mercurial_flux September 26 2007, 04:53:02 UTC
LAWL.

YOU GOT ME INTO THIS PAIRING IN THE FIRST PLACE SO YES, I WILL.

I wanted to post it at your TamaKao community but I realized that I hadn't joined yet... Silly me. :o

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trojan September 26 2007, 04:56:03 UTC
AWESOME I AM EL WINNER.

♥ Haha~. NOW YOU CAN. *A* gatherusmorefans--

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trojan September 26 2007, 03:41:45 UTC
EXCUSE MY SPAM
BUT

THIS IS FOR YOU

not smut but cute? ♥??

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mercurial_flux September 26 2007, 04:54:07 UTC
OMG OMG OMG!! A FIC FOR ME?? This is a first. Thank you sooo much!

(I read it, and it's gorgeous. It's so fluffy and gorgeous and I love it. -ded-)

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trojan September 26 2007, 04:56:55 UTC
WHY OF COURSE. ♥ You're beyond welcome. ;__; YOU HAVE NO CLUE HOW AWESOME IT IS TO COME HOME TO SMUTFIC. XD; -always checks f-list like whoa-

♥ ♥ So not a possible doujin idea. ...I'm a tard, yes.

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mercurial_flux September 26 2007, 05:09:34 UTC
Aw. It's not even like real smut. I cheated and cut to the good parts. :o And even then it's still only a lame R. D;

OMG. YES IT IS. YES IT IS. I'd be so happy to see non-Haruhi-related doujin uploaded around here. ;___;

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mourir September 26 2007, 04:02:36 UTC
mercurial_flux September 26 2007, 05:04:30 UTC
NO WAI. Who is Bosanova? ;____;

Thank you so much though! I felt all happy reading this review x33 You always write the nicest reviews and it makes me so happy. I'm really flattered and I want to put Kaoru in a cute frilly dress and give him to you because. 8D

BECAUSE YOU'RE DAMN AMAZING MORE AND THE KAORU YOU WRITE IS LOVE TIMES A MILLION. SO THERE. WHAT NOW.

:o

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mourir September 26 2007, 14:13:58 UTC

reno_zotto October 12 2007, 13:26:19 UTC
oh my gosh, so delicious and beautiful, just like everything else of yours I read. How cute for Kaoru to blush at the thought of being with someone so clumbsy and over dramatic! How doting and wonderful for Tamaki to confort Kaoru who is always trying to suffer alone. I will never get over how perfect you describe Kaoru's defensive, gaurded nature.

You captured everything very well, and you gave so much imagery and detail with such little words/effort. Amazing job!

Oh by the way, I'm Crimson Vixen from fanfiction.net

I'll be adding you now *teehee!*

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