[ OKHC ] Fraise - Oneshot

[mercurial_flux]

Title: Fraise
Rating: R/NC-17
Word Count: 2934
Pairing: Hikaru x Kaoru
Warnings: PWP. Twinsmut. And a bad excuse for it, too. Not beta’d.
Summary: Hikaru watches Kaoru sleep and is mesmerized.
Author’s Notes: I’ve read a lot of those fics where Kaoru watches Hikaru sleep and smut ensues, but none the other way around. I opted to remedy that. (Praises to

Comments

[yurameki_tenshi]

Awww I thought the ending was cute and funny x3 As for the rest of the fic.....well, it was INSANELY HOT.

x3

[mercurial_flux]

Haha, thanks! Glad my sad attempt at being remotely amusing there at the end pulled through, especially...XD Thanks for reviewing!

[blufox_o7]

Kaoru's a total tease! I love him to bits! :)

[mercurial_flux]

He's adorable, isn't he? x3

[lalachoy]

That was good. Very good!

And the ending wasn't bad at all, but I know your pain about endings. 'Cept I can never write a sad ending. xD

[mercurial_flux]

Ugh. Endings. The bane of my existence. Man, I can never seem to write a happy ending. Love how that works out. XD

And thanks a lot for reading!

[vollykins]

-fans self- that was amazingly hot. :D i think you did a wonderful job with this. i particularly liked the little introspection bit in the beginning, with how kaoru looked while sleeping and all.

in short--i loved it. XD

[mercurial_flux]

Thanks a lot!

[ina_noranaya]

That was a delicious piece of writing. And teasing-Kaoru is delightful.

You're right, I don't think I've seen this done before either, or at least not often. And the ending came off just fine.

[mercurial_flux]

Thank you very much! I'm glad the ending was alright.

Yeah - you know, I think maybe I just wanted another excuse to have Hikaru molest Kaoru. One can't have enough excuses to do that. XD

[dior_anghel]

May I steal your twins icon? If so, who do I credit?