"The Birthday Gift" - 3 of 4

[mercsgoodgirl]

Title: The Birthday Gift: Chapter Three
Author: mercsgoodgirl

Summary: Jayne proves he’s well prepared to help Kaylee celebrate her birthday.

Disclaimer: Firefly, Serenity, and all related characters are copyright 2002-2005 Mutant Enemy, Inc., Universal Pictures, and 20th Century Fox. This is a work of fanfiction. No copyright infringement is

Comments

[svan_1004]

you write very well. I have enjoyed everything you have produced.
So, When will you have Chapter 4 out?

[mercsgoodgirl]

Thanks - been at it a long, long time :) I'm glad you've enjoyed my fics and am please to say that the final chapter of this is up now.

[xenaclone]

Jayne in my bath?

Yes, PLEASE!!!

[mercsgoodgirl]

A girl can always dream, right?

[katmarajade]

Um, Jayne and Kaylee in a giant bathtub? Could there be anything hotter than that? Cuz I'm thinking no. I love Kaylee's startled reaction and how sweet Jayne is here. It's one thing I love about this pairing is that Kaylee, all sunshine and rainbows and teddy-bear overalls and sexiness, really draws out the sweetness in Jayne, who is usually so guarded and hardened and a bit of a jackass. And I'm with Kaylee-- the idea of Jayne sneaking over to her room and hightailing it back to his own bunk when he hears Mal next door is so adorable, funny, and endearing! I love these two.

[mercsgoodgirl]

...one thing I love about this pairing is that Kaylee, all sunshine and rainbows and teddy-bear overalls and sexiness, really draws out the sweetness in Jayne, who is usually so guarded and hardened and a bit of a jackass.

Me, too. I think she believes in him, believes there's more to him than others see, and that kind of love can redeem a man.