Firecracker ( Phoenix / Edgeworth ) [2/2]

[mercilouslia]

Title: Firecracker
Pairings & Characters: Phoenix Wright/Miles Edgeworth, Kristoph Gavin/Miles Edgeworth, implied!Maya Fey, implied!Pearl Fey, implied!Larry Butz, Trucy Wright, Apollo Justice, implied!Mia Fey, Dick Gumshoe, Ema Skye
Rating: Make it a safe R.
Warnings: Metaphors like a sonovabitch, un-beta`d, sexual activity, angst, swearing,

Comments

[arora_kayd]

;^;

But I loved it all the same. Oh, I am a masochist.

[trenchkamen]

Oh, wow. I remember reading this on the kink meme a while ago. I still absolutely love the allegories you've made with astronomy and the Tarot. They flow together and work on so many levels.

This was heartbreaking, but beautiful. Very sensory and stream-of-consciousness, but coherent. Excellent job.

[silverhalo]

It took me a few minutes, just a *teensy* bit of effort on my part, to get use to the writing style of this fic and figure out what was going on. I just had a good feeling about it, for whatever reason, so I kept reading.

And my god, was it worth it. *__* So very, very heartbreaking, such visceral writing... I don't know what else to say really, except that you are an immensely talented writer. Thank you for this work of art; I really loved it.

(And Gumshoe is a puppy in Phoenix's dream-conscience? I think I love you. XD)

[dreamdischarger]

This is by far one of the most amazing fanfics that I've ever read. Seriously, like silverhalo said, this is a work of art. It all fit together so nicely; the metaphors and imagery that you used, the language is gorgeous, the style is brilliant...;__; I honestly don't think I've ever read anything that has touched me more than this.

It's such a heartbreaking fic, but in all the best ways, really. The ending, especially - I felt so bad for Phoenix, living with the guilt, blaming himself for something that wasn't his fault...

You took an idea that, in my opinion, most people can't do right - the rape aspect, I mean - and you made it unique and original. Nothing about this fic is overdone or cliche. Everything leading up to Phoenix and Gumshoe's conversation was so beautiful and poignant and then you dropped that bombshell... I totally didn't see it coming, and I was unprepared for it, which is a good thing :P. And Phoenix's reaction was both incredibly human and deliciously heartbreaking. So was Miles'. Miles' reaction was perfect; not

[ningen_demonai]

Omg, you wrote Firecracker. I should send you the doctor's bill for that broken heart. ;; B-but omg, it was so pretty and wonderfully written. ♥