I've Got My Eye On You (aka: Turnabout Ju-on) ( Implied Phoenix / Edgeworth )

[mercilouslia]

Title: I've Got My Eye On You
Pairing/Characters: Phoenix/Edgeworth, Kristoph Gavin, Trucy Wright, platonic Phoenix/Maya, Pearl Fey, Klavier Gavin, Apollo Justice, Larry Butz
Rating: Mm. PG-13
Warnings: Heavy swearing, un-beta`d, character death, vengeful Edgeworth! Ooo~
Prompt:
I have read stories where Kristoph kills Edgeworth in a perfect

Comments

[einmonim]

sdlfkj AGH I read this on the kink meme, and I... kind of hate it and love it at the same time. ;__; Pearls and Larry a-and Miles... but then I'm also happy that Kristoph is dead and Edgeworth is still protecting him. *Flails*

But er, either way, good job... though if my dog wasn't with me when I was reading this I'd have seriously spazzed out. W-which is a compliment! Ouija boards scare the fuck out of me. D:

[mercilouslia]

:0

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and, believe me, I had the very same problem while writing it. .______. I get scared by Nancy Drew books, ja? I had to have all the lights on and my puppy with me just to type this shit out.

D:
Ouija Boards are srs bsns.

[arora_kayd]

I really enjoyed this. I was a bit surprised by the people that got killed of, but that tends to happen in these situations.

The mention of the elevator, the ICU floor and one other part that I can't think of (XD) made me happy. I ♥ attention to detail.

But man is Edgeworth bitter-pants ^^;

[mercilouslia]

Indeed, it does. xD; And I'm oh-so-happy that you enjoyed it~

:D Detail = one of my best weapons. I love making those minor notes that only a few people will get..but are amazing when they do understand!

Oh, and, of course. At least he's not so bitter after he kills three people?

[wmelon_kaiye]

I don't really understand some parts of it. O_O
It just seems a bit overly complicated.

Hrm, but then again, we are dealing with spirits here and what rules apply to that?

XD

[mercilouslia]

DD:
Plz to be telling me these things, so I can better mah fics?

[wmelon_kaiye]

Oh uhh... well, IDK girl. XD

[mercilouslia]

Mmm~ I see what you mean.

The whole thing with an AU is to make it AU. So, naturally, the supernatural-esque rules of the game don't have to apply. Hell, I didn't even have to even pay attention to any of the elements. :D Long live AU

[mercilouslia]

Thank you! :D

; o ;
Your icon scared the poo outta me.

[dreamdischarger]

Ah, I read this all on the kink meme first, and I loved it. It was very...eerie. And, well, sad. I'm torn between feeling bad for Phoenix - who just lost pretty much everyone important in his life - and Miles. Your writing = awesome.

[mercilouslia]

:D Long live the kink meme! <3

Oh, and, I'm really glad that you loved it! :DD I'm glad that I got down the points that I wanted to ( the shared despair between Fee and Miles~ ).

And. Jeeze. xD Thank you~! <3