Comments | mercaque: Fic: "A Simple Transaction," Chekov/Sulu, Star Trek XI

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Fic: "A Simple Transaction," Chekov/Sulu, Star Trek XI

Mar 05, 2011 08:37

Title: A Simple Transaction
Pairing: Chekov/Sulu
Rating: NC-17
Type: Oneshot, complete
Summary: Written for kink prompt: Sulu is an extremely rich and successful businessman. Pavel is his pretty, young kept boy who Sulu loves more than anything. Sulu got him from an agency and he enjoys his work but Pavel is his REAL passion in life, Pavel's got ( Read more... )

star trek fic, chekov/sulu

Comments 17

rubynye March 5 2011, 18:08:35 UTC

Oh, oh my HEART! I should write something analytical, but I'm kind of just hugging myself and squeaking in joy.

mercaque March 5 2011, 18:45:11 UTC

Yay!! Squeaking is good! Thank you XDDD

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mercaque March 5 2011, 21:14:11 UTC

HAAA well this is what fandom has done to me. I'm not always a fan of master/slave stuff, but writing this piece was really fun. I liked playing with them in this 'verse, and I like to think Sulu cashed in the company and they took their breathless and overly possessive show on the road, traveling around the world together XD

As for "baby"... sometimes the moment just cries out for it!

tallycola March 5 2011, 21:27:27 UTC

Oh my gosh this was in turns incredibly hot, incredibly tense, and incredibly fucking sweet. Brilliant!

mercaque March 5 2011, 22:26:47 UTC

Thank you! :)

the_archandroid March 6 2011, 00:55:12 UTC

oh man.. this left me sort of breathless! there is just something about sulu and chekov (maybe their youth?) that makes them inherently urgent and sexy beyond belief and that urgency is doubled in the situation they find themselves in, the belief of a finite contract, sulu being in this seemingly inescapable fate of becoming a businessman, you totally up the stakes and it just ratchets the hotness that much more, you know? Not to mention the fact that I go crazy for power dynamics like this... scorchingly hot.

mercaque March 6 2011, 01:12:54 UTC

Holy wow, thank you! I don't always conceive of Sulu as having daddy issues but once that sort of worked its way into the story I became really fascinated by it (and how it affected his relationship with Chekov). Thank you so much for reading!

therumjournals March 6 2011, 03:31:58 UTC

i love the descriptions in this. they really made the story (and made the porn UBER hot!) and the last paragraph was awesome - really wrapped the whole thing up so beautifully.

mercaque March 6 2011, 14:20:43 UTC

Thank you! The world suggested by the prompt was just really fun to play around with. And, you know, write porn in >:3