Raise the Dead Character Challenge:February 2009 Elizabeth

[meowbooks]

Title: Jamaica's Defiance
Author:
meowbooks

Rating: G

Characters: Elizabeth, Will, Governor Swann, The Island of Jamaica

Disclaimer: Disney owns PotC.
Words: 247
Summary: Written for
raise_the_dead  character challenge. Elizabeth admires Jamaica's defiant ways.
February 2009: Elizabeth

Comments

[veronica_rich]

Oh! It's good to see another rare response to one of these character months!

My concrit first: The "it's" in the final bit should be "its," just FYI.

Now that that's out of the way, I like this. Will does need to learn selective defiance, and it must be particularly frustrating for Elizabeth to see him this way, knowing he has some pirate relationship from the medallion she took off of him. I also am tickled by the idea of an island having a personality and how it ties in with the seasons.

(But I must ask - what is a mud monster? Is that just her way of saying she tripped? *G*)

[meowbooks]

Ack, typos! And thank you for your kind review. :D

Yes, that was her way of saying she tripped. I imagine she'd find that much more interesting, less embarrassing, and possibly slightly romantic if Will had saved her from a mud monster instead of her own clumsiness.

[pearly_dreams]

Oooh!! How charming! ^_^ I quite liked it.

[meowbooks]

I'm quite glad you did. Thanks for reviewing. :D

[danglingdingle]

How delightful little piece to alight my dreary day. I love how this moment somehow shows the relationship between Will and Elizabeth maturing from a childhood crush, and into something more severe, whether they fully understand it or not.

Lovely.

[meowbooks]

Thanks for the very kind review and for reading. :D

[gryphons_lair]

HURRAH!

This is lovely.

I think you've captured Elizabeth's personality very well, and Will's and Gov Swann's reactions are spot-on, too.

And Gibbs next? Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

[meowbooks]

A hurrah? Wow, I'm much obliged and very pleased you liked it. Yup, Gibbs is up next.

[lilfluffykitten]

Awww - sweet! As others have already said, it's always nice to see an answer to the character challenge (I'm already looking forward to your Gibbs piece!) :)

Hmmm, LJ obviously hates me. There's a chance this is the third time I've left this comment - if so, sorry!

[meowbooks]

Thanks, it's lovely to see people enjoying what I've written. :D