Comments | menzjj815: fic: How heavy are these words?

menzjj815

fic: How heavy are these words?

Jan 24, 2010 23:30

Characters: Olivia, Peter

Spoilers: Through 2x10, Grey Matters.

Summary: Olivia looks for Peter after he finds out about his past.

( Falling from my mouth, secondary doubts I've found myself in....control has slipped away from me again.... )

fic, olivia, polivia, peter

Comments 4

lovexwentxred January 25 2010, 04:59:03 UTC

Girllll...this fic is my fave Fringe one so far! I could totally see this happening. Your words just flow so beautifully. This...

You weren’t one to lose control, but he brought out the worst in you.
Oh the sweet irony. Liv seeing herself opening up to someone as her weakness, as losing control, and thus a bad thing. I loved that line. It's just such a good description for her perspective. And need I mention the kiss?! GUH. I'm all for a situation like this. Amazing job my dear!

menzjj815 January 25 2010, 22:59:38 UTC

thank you! *hugs*

I'm glad you liked that part...I wasn't sure whether to change it or not, but it's true. she hates losing control, lol. I'm glad you are all in for this situation. I don't think it will go down this way at all, but a girl can hope!

thanks again!

izbetterthanu January 25 2010, 17:58:37 UTC

wifey this is one of your best fics, in any fandom you work with! not only can i see this happening but the wording you used in this is amazing. the beginning and the end slay me. now i am between two kinds of first kisses, damn you! i wanted a Syd/Vaughn kind of kiss and you ruined me *spanks*

menzjj815 January 25 2010, 23:08:20 UTC

OMG! what a lovely compliment! *hugs* I'm so glad you loved it that much. I'd go for a Phase One kiss too, but then I'd feel like JJ was ripping himself off, lol. and Polivia already have quite a few similarities to Syd/Vaughn imo.

you can spank me all you want though ;)

thanks again Wifey!