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mentholpixie

Because the Beyond Called

May 03, 2016 15:55

Because the Beyond Called

Summary: Dean is a large, dark blur wavering above Sam's face, identifiable only by the smell of gun oil and leather and the fact that he's here while Sam's feeling like death.

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comment fic, blood loss, bigbrotherdean, supernatural fanfiction, druggedsam, possessedsam, hurt/comfort, hurtsam, suicide attempt

Comments 15

borgmama1of5 May 3 2016, 05:27:11 UTC

Absolutely love Dean's comments and Sam's stream-of-consciousness response--it felt like this came right out of an episode!

mentholpixie May 3 2016, 05:32:48 UTC

Thank you!

quickreaver May 3 2016, 18:05:26 UTC

It DID feel like it could've been from an episode! I can totally see it...

lennelle May 3 2016, 07:55:10 UTC

yaaay!! I'm so glad you filled my prompt! This is amazing, thank you! I love the virgin suicides and girl, interupted references, it's so in-character for Dean to take the piss out of Sam even when he almost lost him for good, and poor Sam who barely has a clue what's going on. Gah! I loved this!!

mentholpixie May 3 2016, 20:31:13 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you like it!

freya922 May 3 2016, 10:45:11 UTC

Perfectly crafted angst plus beautiful brotherly banter!

mentholpixie May 3 2016, 20:39:29 UTC

Thank you!

madebyme_x May 3 2016, 12:05:25 UTC

A wonderful fill for the prompt! I loved how you captured Sam's confusion, and Dean's jokes masking his worry are perfect in every way.

Thank you for sharing :)

mentholpixie May 3 2016, 20:50:52 UTC

Thank you for reading! :)

quickreaver May 3 2016, 18:04:44 UTC

TIGHT!

The dialogue is delicious, and I love the way you capped this ficlet with a wrap-around from the opening. So good, punkin!

mentholpixie May 3 2016, 20:53:31 UTC

Thank you!!