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mentholpixie

Two Roads Diverge in a Wood

Mar 05, 2013 13:58

Two Roads Diverged in a Wood

Summary: Tag to Warriors, set earlier. Sam's still reeling from his diagnosis and right now he just needs a moment to think.

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bigbrotherdean, teenchesters, sicksam, supernatural fanfiction, hurt/comfort, cancer, protective dean, angst

Comments 24

quickreaver March 5 2013, 01:32:01 UTC

Lady, this was amazing. The writing was so understated and SO THEM. It makes me want to go back and read Warriors again, so I'm gonna.

This bit: "Sunlight is filtering through the leaves as separate, sparkling stars and he has to squint against it. Through his eyelashes the light stretches itself into long, soft rainbows." Such a pretty, pretty passage.

I don't know what it is about cancer that works so well when woven into the SPN world. It isn't even just the h/c aspect; I think it's because chances are, the disease has touched each and every one of us. It's a wicked, wicked monster. And just like Sam said, you can't shoot it with a silver bullet.

I'll take all the Warrior's 'Verse you can write, Pixie. :D

mentholpixie March 5 2013, 02:34:32 UTC

Thanks, hun! It means a lot knowing that you like this considering how frikking awesome you are!

ayane42 March 5 2013, 01:53:39 UTC

damn! this was good!! so heartfelt...just wow! especially the last line.

mentholpixie March 5 2013, 02:36:00 UTC

Thank you! I'm thrilled that you like this :)

embroiderama March 5 2013, 02:37:08 UTC

Aw, wow. This is really quiet and lovely, even while it's sad.

mentholpixie March 5 2013, 03:02:51 UTC

XD Thank you!

cappy712 March 5 2013, 06:03:04 UTC

Thank you that was a great addition to the story Warriors. Just the fact he went to the woods to think and I wasn't hiding - cute. Thank you again for sharing.

mentholpixie March 5 2013, 06:11:38 UTC

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you like this. :D

dualityforce March 5 2013, 10:49:13 UTC

Yesyesyes, there is more cancer!sam!

I'm so, so pleased that you added more the this little 'verse - hell, I knew I was gonna love it when I saw that you'd used a line of one of my favourite ever poems as the title.

You have such an awesome grasp on their personalities and the characterization here is perfect.

Favourite line: "Dean always has to be moving. Sam wishes everything could stay still."

I'm going to forever live in hope that you'll add more to this :)

dualityforce March 5 2013, 10:55:31 UTC

Whoops... this is nblaque-impala, I didn't realise I was logged onto AJ's account!

mentholpixie March 5 2013, 20:38:17 UTC

Lol well I'm glad you liked this! I have my fingers crossed that I'll come back to this 'verse and do more, even though I should be working on other things. This is just too much fun to write (and that sounds really mean. Sorry Sammy, you hurt so pretty!).

And that poem is totally awesome!