Sammy In Captivity 1/4

[mentholpixie]

Sammy In Captivity

Summary: Jason watches as the Keeper's bring in the new kid. Outsider POV.

Comments

[mentholpixie]

Thanks! I'll try to post more quickly. :)

[auroramama]

Well, damn. Naturally the best thing I've read today is part 1 of 4!
I like Jason a lot. I'm sure he's not all sweetness and light, but I like that he doesn't attack Sam for having hope.

[mentholpixie]

Ha, I'll try not to take too long posting the next three chapters. :)

I'm really glad you like Jason - he's been a struggle to write but interesting too.

[andrea94]

So good can't wait for more!

[mentholpixie]

Thank you!!!

[sylvia_locust]

Ohmygod so interesting and upsetting and chest-hurty and I love the OPOV. Poor autistic(?) Jason and poor Sam and are they "special" kids? And why won't you LEAVE SAMMY'S HAIR ALONE! *breathes*

Can't wait to read more!

ETA: Love the Decemberists!

[mentholpixie]

Lol, I swear I don't know why I can't leave Sammy's hair alone! I just CAN'T! It's just such a violating thing, I felt this story needed it, I guess... I don't know, maybe I'm just nuts. *shrug*

Yes, I am trying to write Jason as autistic which is probably the most challenging thing I've done with my writing and I've been stressing out about it. I've done some research but I don't have much experience with autism and I'd hate to offend anyone. *fingers crossed everything will go fine*

And yes, special kids!

[sylvia_locust]

No, you're right it is violating and very effective, which is probably why I keep shouting at you about it :) Also, I think you're doing a great job with Jason's voice.

[mentholpixie]

XD *phew*

[shescheeky]

This is actually quite daunting! Especially that last line. I'm looking forward to the rest.

[mentholpixie]

Thank you for reading! I'll try to get the next chapter up quickly. :)