Lunchbreak!Ficlets #4 & #5

[memphis86]

Belated beyond, I know. Last night I was all, wah wah, I've lost my GROOVE. And then this morning I get on the train, sit down, open my notebook and BAM!

(Okay, both are shorty mc shortpants but I'm honestly happy to get ANYTHING down right now.)

For jenadamson: An A Priori timestamp.  Assume spoilers and such.  PG-13.

Comments

[pushingyouaway]

squeeeeeee! your writing!foo is back!

*cookies*

[memphis86]

Thank you! I hope so!!

[dreamlittleyo]

Oh, these are just LOVELY! You've got such a way with words, dear, I hope you realize that. The first one just blew me away, phenomenal imagery that felt so SOLID even though Dean is in a dream. The very end of it just tore me apart, and I adore you for that. Love the second one, too, so hot and vivid and that last line just kills me in the best way.

Beautiful work!

[memphis86]

Oh thank you so much for that lovely compliment!! ♥

I'm so glad you liked these.

[thefreeroad]

DEAN. :(

[memphis86]

Well, um, yes?

Thank you for reading!

[pocketfullof]

Both of these are just so vivid and lovely. Of course, I'm partial to the one for me, but, you know. :D :D

[memphis86]

Yay! I'm so glad you liked yours (even though it's hella short, sorry). Thanks!!

[pomavera]

WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE A PRIORI!!!! WEEEEEEEEEE!!

Oh, and the second one was so beautiful and intense and vivid. I wish you write more in that setting but I'm always greedy for your writing. I love it.

[memphis86]

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked this!