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arashi fiction 38 - get yourself promoted

Jul 24, 2009 18:26

Title: Motivation
Pairing: Jun/Sho
Rating: P for Porn?
Summary: Jun thinks he can be promoted by the end of the week. How hard can it be to gain his boss's approval?

Notes: This was originally done for the je_fqfest in response to a request by blutigertod. I had fun writing it! Definitely a first for me in fiction. Glad to be working my way up the pr0n ladder. ;)

( how to take advantage of your lunch hour, and your superior )

rated arrr, pairing: jun/sho, genre: pr0n

Comments 42

jackie July 25 2009, 00:27:37 UTC

OKAY SERIOUSLY. SERIOUSLY DUDE. Jun has been sneaking his way back into my good graces and THIS IS WHAT YOU DO??? *FLAILS*

nicefinalbeam July 25 2009, 01:21:52 UTC

I think Jun is an amazing, amazing character to write. He gets missed out a lot in fic because people love Ohmiya and Sakuraiba, but really... writing from his perspective is kind of exciting for me. :D

Glad you liked this! ♥

jackie July 25 2009, 01:23:42 UTC

Thinking about it...this is probably one of the only Jun POV's I've read! :O Poor unloved Jun. ♥♥♥ A+ work, madame. XD

nicefinalbeam July 25 2009, 01:25:19 UTC

I've gotten to write from his perspective a couple of times. I did for the Sho/Jun multi-chapter fic I did and I really loved it then. And also once for a Jun/Nino. Oh, and a Jun/Ohno one too.

Okay, I write from his perspective a lot more than I realized, but I've also written a lot more for this fandom in general than I realized. SERIOUSLY. *___*

And thanks again. :D

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b00kw0rm79 July 25 2009, 01:09:33 UTC

Jun and Sho together, is always hot.
You found a way to make them even hotter.

I loved the setting and how in character you kept everyone.

nicefinalbeam July 25 2009, 01:22:54 UTC

AGREED. *___*
And thank you omg, that really makes me happy. :D

And YAY. I wanted to make sure that sense of THIS IS ARASHI was still there even though it's an AU thing. <3

waxrose July 25 2009, 01:56:18 UTC

Shjfjhfdkd;jdk WOW. This is awesome. ♥♥♥ I love Nino's way of making friends and I love your Sho. This is so good. *_______*

nicefinalbeam July 25 2009, 20:46:43 UTC

Thank you. *blush* I really have fun writing Sho. I think I relate to him on some strange level.

daisuki_dkzen July 25 2009, 02:02:33 UTC

yesyesyesyesyesYES!!! ^_____________________________^

i am a happy camper indeed.

i loved the image of ohno laughing at his pencil sculptures and inappropriate emails (that were probably sent by nino and aiba)!! loved it!

and i reeeeeeeaaaaallly loved sho giving up the control to jun cuz hes just sick of it already. jun was more than happy to take the reins, im sure.

<3333333

nicefinalbeam July 25 2009, 20:47:40 UTC

They were most definitely sent by Nino and Aiba. :D :D

Jun was thrilled to be in control for awhile. ;)

And yay! Thank you. Reading these comments makes me want to write more about this little universe. LOL.

daisuki_dkzen July 26 2009, 19:15:38 UTC

oh ho! please do continue writing in this universe...especially if that involves more Sakumoto smex. *squee* XDDDD

katmillia July 25 2009, 02:13:06 UTC

what the fuuuuuuck omg omg omg why do you do this to me

I saw this come up on my RSS feed but I can't get to anything from work other than stuff above the cut and I was like HOMG I NEED TO GO HOME RIGHT NOW.

SHO/JUN. OMG MY PAIRING. AJKSFKASJDFKJAKFDJASKJFDSLAJS

You hit like- everything. Guh. The humor, the oh god the sexual harassment option, the PLATE HAHAHA META META META. Gun the sex was like 500x of hot, and you used a mother-fucking tie as a blind-fold omg do you have a page with all my kinks on it right there or something?? THIS IS JUST TOO MUCH. I am a pile of goo. A sticky, slightly uncomfortable pile of goo.

You made my night! <3 <3

katmillia July 25 2009, 02:14:07 UTC

AND I FORGOT that you actually had Jun top Sho, which is my ultimate fap fap fap fantasy seriously oh god I love you. Why does this not happen more often. Why are you not writing this all the time. Why do you dare to have a life?!?!?! xD

nicefinalbeam July 25 2009, 20:50:47 UTC

:D :D :D Your pairing indeed! And quickly becoming a favorite of mine. Haha.

I do not have a page of your kinks, but if you wanted to write them down for me? <3

As for why it doesn't happen more often - it was my first real pr0n that actually got into some detail, and also I like to write pretty much every Arashi pairing there is so sometimes it takes me awhile to get back to a pair. But, I'm hoping from now on this will get a little easier to write? And then there will be more for you. Maybe even in this little AU world, since writing them in an office was somehow really fun. ♥

Thanks! Your comments make me happy. :D