arashi fiction 36 - because someone has to feel a little third wheel

Jun 25, 2009 15:19

Title: Now on VHS
Who: Nino/Sho/Ohno
Genre: Slight Angst, Fluff ♥
Rating: R (light)
Summary: Sho leaves Nino a confession on tape, but what does that mean for Ohno?
Notes: Originally written for the sei_shoku birthday contest. Couldn't resist giving a birthday gift to Nino. ♥ I've never done threesome fic before this, and I don't know how often I'll do them ( Read more... )

fandom: arashi, rated arrr, pairing: nino/sho/ohno, genre: fluff, genre: angst

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waxrose June 25 2009, 20:02:56 UTC
You are awesome. ♥

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nicefinalbeam June 25 2009, 20:05:05 UTC
Thanks. Sometimes I'm not so sure, and I worked so very hard on this one. Means a lot. ♥

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tartaruga139 June 25 2009, 20:20:52 UTC
Hee, I totally thought this was you when I was reading the submissions.

I loved the idea of a video birthday greeting. Your brain is such win!

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nicefinalbeam June 25 2009, 20:55:02 UTC
I have a recognizable style most of the time, don't I? Oh well. I can't really help that.

And thanks! Nino helped a lot. ♥

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still_ciircee June 25 2009, 20:29:41 UTC
I still have so very much love for this story. It just works. They're GUYS so they don't reaally talk about it and how they feel so it felt very true-to-life on that level. And it's ARASHI so it coming together so wall also felt realistic to me. The fact that Aiba and Jun don't know (or don't yet know) is something that works for me, too.

Two lines I absolutely adore: 'they'd always known how to be together' *melts inside*

and

"WHAT!?" Nino's mind screamed. Ohno kissed his neck.

"He talks a lot," he tried again, maybe thinking his audience would be more receptive this time.

*dies*

You are brilliant.

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nicefinalbeam June 25 2009, 20:57:18 UTC
Yeah, I mean, sometimes it feels so embarrassing to have them confessing their love like women. ;) I tend to fall back on out of the blue mentions, increased tension (fights), or crack to get the job done Haha. This seemed like a new way to handle it. ♥

When you tell me I'm brilliant, I start to believe it. Thanks, you! :D

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dagorwen June 25 2009, 21:20:46 UTC
This is awesome!! ^^

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nicefinalbeam June 26 2009, 16:26:20 UTC
Thanks so much! :D

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gimmick_game June 25 2009, 23:38:13 UTC
dsjafldsajdlsja awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

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nicefinalbeam June 26 2009, 16:26:53 UTC
<3 <3 <3

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