arashi fiction 30 - because you don't need plot, just bulge

[nicefinalbeam]

Title: Only the Unknown (Chapter 04)
Genre: Slight Angst, Romance, Fluff!
Who: Sho/Nino
Rating: PG-13
Previous Chapters: 01 02 03
Notes: Special thinks to mitsuchan and gimmick_game for last minute beta help.

Comments

[katmillia]

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
I can't even decide which part of this was my favorite!! It's the little things that make your writing shine so much, like the concealer and the needing to brush teeth, and the dialogue is astounding and amazing. Plus, we all know how Nino likes sneaking into futons with people hahahaha. This is so good! So so so good, I'm so hooked. xD

[nicefinalbeam]

WHEEEEEEE. I'm really so happy to hear it. <3 Of course Nino would sneak into that futon. He's got Sho on the brain.

[katmillia]

lol now its that work has blocked me from LJ, so I can't read any fic at work!! GAAAAAH THIS PAINS ME SOOOO MUCH WHY DO THEY DO THAT TO ME. So sometimes I'm missing updates on the f-list since I have so much to go through at night. FAIL. I AM FAIL. lol BUT I AM GLAD I NOTICED AND WENT BACK TO READ THESE CHAPTERS. ^______^ <3

[kireiyakusoku]

KYA! It cameee!! I've been waiting for this!
And apparently, so has Sho! So cute! It's such love! Ugh, how many times have I said it now? But you're amazing! I could feel everything and see it perfectly!! hehe who wouldn't be arroused from falf-naked-Sho? Seriously.
Great job! I can't wait for the next!!

[nicefinalbeam]

Yes! Finally got my act together and wrote it. :)
(I would totally be aroused by half-naked Sho. TMI? LOL!)

Thanks for commenting! <3

[cherry_armrest]

I really love the way you write Nino and how he struggles with his emotions =)

Oh. and Nino's adam's apple! ♥ ^_^

[nicefinalbeam]

I had to point out how amazing Nino's neck is. I didn't even know I liked necks until I fell in love with his.

[tickettomayhem]

I don't mind you going back to one-shots...

...As long as you keep writing Sakumiya. XD

[nicefinalbeam]

I set this all in the early years, so I'm far from finished with Sakumiya. Plenty of ideas for one-shots and drabble type things in the future. :)

[rinalin]

*rains a thousand hearts down upon you*

I love the perfect kiss so completely imperfect. Those are my favorite. Definitely.

[nicefinalbeam]

*dances*

I think they're just more natural. First kisses always come at the perfect time and are horrible somehow as well. Haha. <3

Have to get a proper confession out of them though. More to come!