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[ubiquity]

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Pretty.
If I might offer a slight scansion edit -

Ideas make you stay awake at night

becomes

Ideas might make you stay awake at night

[memegarden]

Thank you.

It scans better to my ear this way. Like this:

The original line:
Could make you want to stay awake at night
My line:
I de as make you stay awake at night

Oh, and if you're wondering about the scansion of
the title, I sing it so the second syllable is stressed, to fit it all in:
The original line:
Nine -ty- nine point nine Fahrenheit degrees
My line:
Four-Hun-dred -fif- ty one Fahrenheit degrees

Also, I just edited the lyrics and changed "you could be normal" to "you should be normal".

[xthread]

I was always amazed that she managed to make the word 'Farenheit' scan with anything, ever

[memegarden]

Mm? She didn't use "Fahrenheit at the end of any lines, so I'm not sure where you're seeing her rhyming it.