867. how's my driving

[thisisasockmeme]

How's My Driving?

I think everyone knows what this is for! Give the players you love CONSTRUCTIVE criticism on how they play their characters and how they can be improved. We all need a little help every now and then!

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Comments

[barbiewithfangs]

Concrit is always welcome on any and all of mine. I'm always willing to hear ways to improve! Some of these I'm aware I haven't played much, but I'd still love to get feedback!

Caroline Forbes | barbiewithfangs
Brittany S. Pierce | moretalented
Sebastian Smythe | no_gayface
Finn Hudson | finnspiration

[barbiewithfangs]

You're one of the worst thread-droppers I've tagged with and it's the reason why I stopped tagging you at all. Waste of my time bothering at the end of the day if I know no replies are going to come for day, sometimes weeks later.

[barbiewithfangs]

Your Sebastian seems weak and contrived. He needs more work and attention to canon.

[barbiewithfangs]

It's hard to give concrit on characters who aren't written consistently.

Also agree with the thread dropping comment above. I no longer have interest in launching anything with you because everything was dropped within 5-10 tags. You seem cliquey and only tag longer with one or two other favoured muns. Not really a good look if you're looking for anything elsewhere.

[barbiewithfangs]

Pretty much agree with everything said here. Your characterizations are weak, and you only tag with a few other people, and otherwise, the only thing consistent about your playing is the inconsistency.

[barbiewithfangs]

You play Brittany like she's retarted. Yes, she is simple in canon, but she also has some shiningly insightful and deep moments to her. You take the simple to the extreme and it reads to me like your aim is to write her like she's completely stupid. Which is a shame, because she's a multi-faceted character and not two-dimensional like you have her. There's more to her than just talking about her cat and being Santana's bitch.

[imthenewguy]

Personally, I love you and your characters but I'm sure that now slips me in to the 'clique' or something along those lines. I understand that sometimes RL gets in the way of tags and that's okay. I love the Sam/Caroline we got started, I'm excited for Sambastian and think you're personally a lot of fun to tag with/and in general. ♥