Fic: Pas de deux

[melyanna]

Title: Pas de deux
Author: Melyanna
Recipient: havocthecatRating: R

Comments

[nightswhisper]

OOO! What a nifty little twist on that story! I loved it! ^.^ *claps* Go you! ^.^

[melyanna]

Thank you!

[sunny_serenity]

[melyanna]

This particular disorder and its variants are usually referred to by French terms. I don't know why, as they do have English analogues.

Thanks for reading - and for catching the Terminator reference I simply couldn't resist. Seriously, there was much giggling when I thought of it. ;)

[sunny_serenity]

[sapphs]

Amazing.

[oparu]

"I figured I'd remember having sex with you." is fabulous.

And the end is so crazy good that I'm having trouble describing my squee. Wanting to kiss for real and have non-head-sex is just to fun. ;)

[emmy_roo]

That's really cool, Mely! I haven't ever read any of your SGA fanfic before. It's awesome to see how you've grown as a writer since the old days. :)

I really like this fic, too. It feels a lot like an actual episode - about the right length, the same sorts of startings and endings, etc. It almost feels like one of those wacky episodes of Star Trek where nothing is quite what it appears to be.

I may have to read more of these . . .