Unforgivable-- Chapter VIII

[melusine474]

Title: Unforgivable
Author: Melusine
Beta: toshimalfoy
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: WolfYuu/Yuuram, Greta
Warnings this part: Issues of rape
Overall warnings: Angst, violence, incest, dubious consent, statutory rape, issues of rape
Spoilers: Through season 2.
Disclaimer: Kyou Kara Maou! and related characters, situations, etc. belong to Tomo Takabayashi

Comments

OMGFTWBBQ!

[sephzaxcloud]

AHH. UPDATE.

I had to comment on how excited I am! 8DDDDD

--goes to read--

NUUURG.

[sephzaxcloud]

Firstly, I really like how we get to see some of Greta's life now. ^^ A lot of fanfics are centered always, always, always on the main character/couple. I know she's a main character too, but it's nice to have a break from Yuuri and Wolfie for a bit, even though we love them, you know?

...and Wolfram loved Yuuri more than he loved her.

That struck me as very, very heartbreaking. It's great to be emotionally stricken by writing, and this is a good example. I didn't know what to think! Was I angry at Greta for thinking such things? Angry at the brutes who raped her? At Yuuri and Wolfram for coming across this way? I dunno, but the line seemed very significant to me.

And for the rest of the chappie, I say "Uwaa~!" because I'm already dying to read the next part. Guh. You evil creature, you, making me wait. xD

Uhh, sorry for lack of review, and more squeeing than needed. xD UPDATE SOON YES? <333 Thanks!

Re: NUUURG.

[melusine474]

Yay I'm glad you liked it <3

Update coming as soon as possible :)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[meomnimi]

I'm not good with comments, but I really enjoy the depth in which you explore characters and their emotions.

Thank you for writing such an interesting fic, and I look forward to future updates.

[melusine474]

I think that was a great comment ;) Certainly made me blush. Thank you! <3

[anonymous]

Wonderful chapter (ok all chapter are wonderful ) but so, so sad. After I finished it…… it was felling of overwhelming sadness. Because looks like there is no solution. Yurii and Wolfram are on completely different levels, they both want to get over the problem but due different characters and cultures they cannot communicate. Ach, poor botch of them, each in his unique way :]. And Greta, its pity that she is on Earth, because I think she and Wolfram could really comfort each other.

Anyway, I really hope that you will update soon. I will be looking forward for the next chapter
ashram

[melusine474]

Thank you! It is sad-- sometimes I depress myself >.> But! There is a happy ending! \o/

Thanks for the comment! <3 (Update coming as soon as I can manage it without it sucking...)

[pandawolf]

I found it so heartbreaking that Wolf was thinking that all the love he's received throughout his years were all conditional ones :(

[melusine474]

:(

It will get better, though! ...Eventually...

Thanks for reading and commenting <3