Unforgivable-- Chapter VII, part 2

[melusine474]

Title: Unforgivable
Author: Melusine
Beta: toshimalfoy
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: WolfYuu/Yuuram, Greta
Warnings this part: Statutory rape, issues of rape, incest
Overall warnings: Angst, violence, incest, dubious consent, statutory rape, issues of rape
Spoilers: Through season 2.
Disclaimer: Kyou Kara Maou! and related characters, situations, etc.

Comments

[mitsu_san]

SO, I have finally finished chapter 7 now!
Oh dear, this fic is full of mental issues. it's actually the first very angsty!Yuuramfic I've read so far! It makes me kinda traumatized, too xDD". So thrilling, I almost forgot to breath in and out...

I almost cried to because the situation got so heavy, so awkward and thank you very much that you could make me hate Conrad more HAHAH. It's a wonder that Yuuri hadn't punished him for what he had done or being angry with him.

Poor Greta being jealous of Yuuri. Maybe he need someone else like Wolfram in the same age. i feel so sorry for her. I wish she wouldn't have different feelings for Wolf but I can't blame her that. Who couldn't fall in love with our Wolfram <3? hehe

[melusine474]

Aww, I love the art<3 So cute ^.^

I hope I didn't traumatize you too much! :O

There is a happy ending! I promise!!!

There will be an update... at some point... I spent all this past week working on my kkm_challenge fic @.@ so erm at least there was writing?

Thanks for the comment! <3 (and the fanart indulging my family!love^^)

[rynankh]

Firstly, let me point out that you have made an excellent job writing this story, is always difficult to deal with such heavy topics and still be realistic and "touch" your readers :)
I look formard to your updates but I second usukki's suggestion :) try to insert more lighter scenes to make more bearable the heavier ones :3

[melusine474]

and then, over a month later, I finally get back on lj and can reply to your review!

Thank you for reading and commenting! and for the lovely praise :)

Your vote for more lighter scenes is noted XD

(and, yes, I am still writing this fic.)

[rynankh]

okeh ;) I'm so expecting that update :D

Guh.

[sephzaxcloud]

OHGAWD.

Good KKM fics are hard to come across. And I really like this one. Thank you for lighting up my life a little more. <3

I did have some criticism, but I forgot. Sorry. I'll get to it later in another post, when I remember. xD

It's been a while since you've posted...are you still continuing this fic? Please do. It would make me happy. C:

Re: Guh.

[melusine474]

Good KKM fics are hard to come across. And I really like this one. Thank you for lighting up my life a little more. <3

*blushes* Thank you! And you are welcome :D I'm glad that this fic brings light despite its buckets of angst...

Crit is awesome! Post it when you remember and I will be grateful :)

It has indeed been a while since I've posted! It's been six months! :O Which is crazy, because-- not gonna lie-- I spent all my free time thinking about and trying to write this stupid next chapter. It is not for lack of effort that I sometimes have trouble keeping frequent updates...

In conclusion! The next chapter is (say it quietly because I don't want to jinx it) almost ready for a final beta! And the fic itself will never die. Partly because it eats my brain, and partly because Dear Beta toshimalfoy would beat me with small objects if I ever tried to give up.

Re: Guh.

[sephzaxcloud]

You're very welcome. 8D Buckets of angst are welcomed as long as they're written well.

I'll probably have to re read the story in a bit to get my critique back. xD it might take a while cause I have to go to work. e_e But I'll try, for you. <3

I'm just glad you're not abandoning it! I can't stand it when a good fic is just left hanging. It bothers me, because like I said, it's hard to find a good fic in the less popular fandoms. As long as you're sticking to it, I am content.

It's better to take your time with it and do it right then to rush and not like the outcome. ^^ I'll probably be lurking around when you do post it.

I knew I've seen your name before. You're the beta for "Whispers" aren't you? O_O (sorry to change the subject.)

Re: Guh.

[melusine474]

I totally am the beta for Whispers! :D and damn proud of it XD (Although... when a chapter is a few days late, it is usually because I haven't beta'd yet... >.>) I'm happy you recognized me ^^

[wicked_liz]

@_@

My brain, you have killed it. XD

I so wanted to kill Conrad, I'm not his biggest fan to begin with, and yeah, MURDER WITH A SPORK came to mind several times.

I don't mind the age discrepancies, since KKM is pretty vague about it anyway, and it's a fic - so writers are allowed lee-way.

While I do appreciate the romance, I'm a bit horrified at the way Greta and her situation has been handled - but I'm glad you're continuing and look forward to see what you do with it.

Keep up the good work.

[melusine474]

Thank you! I hope I didn't kill your brain too much ^^;;

[kazeyukiryusama]

Well, at first I thought maybe this fic would emphasis on Greta's rape and what will happen to her surroundings (especially her fathers) about this issue

[melusine474]

*blushes*

Thank you! Proud to be thought-provoking ;)

And, yes, you will hardly ever find a fic of mine to be angst-free. I'm glad you appreciate it XD