The promised smut

[melusine474]

Title: Pink Lace
Author: Melusine
Beta: toshimalfoy
Rating: NC-17
Characters/Pairings: Wolf/Yuu and Yuuram
Warnings: None!
Spoilers: None.
Disclaimer: Kyou Kara Maou! and related characters, situations, etc. belong to Tomo Takabayashi and various other people/companies, none of whom are me. This is a fan work; no profit is being made, and no copyright

Comments

[kookiety]

O_O

Woaahhh

Good. God. Hot. Good.

<3!

Whyyyy have I only just started reading KKM fics? *whines*
This was... *flails* I love! <3! Brain is dead. Floating around...
Good. God. Coherency go woo.
*eyes your journal which now looks very glomp-able*
Oh.

Hello! *waves*

[melusine474]

^///^ I'm glad you seem to have enjoyed it XD

My journal glomps you back <3

[f_l_a_b_z]

yum, yum and more yum!
one of the best Y/W smuts I've read :D <3

[melusine474]

0.0 Careful, my head will grow!
<3

[meganinhiding]

Besides the well written smut I also liked the part where Yuri went over the process of realizing he was gay and how noone was surprised. Also liked this part..." He couldn't really explain it anymore than he could get rid of it, this part of himself that told him he didn't want to be the way he was. "I know it doesn't make sense. I didn't even think I had a problem with it, but then it was me and it seemed like the worst thing in the world and it took me three years--" He stopped. "And I know that's stupid."

He felt Wolfram kissing the side of his face. After a moment, he said, "I didn't used to think I had a problem with half-bloods, until I found out my brother was one."

That was a great way to finish the fic.

[melusine474]

Thank you! The oh-noes-gayness!angst is actually my favorite aspect of the fic, so I'm glad someone else liked it ^^

Thanks for reading and commenting <3

[sheinah]

First of all, very, and I mean very, well written. The story, the smut (especially the smut XD), everything.
I was surprised Yuuri was actually gay. It's the first time I see that in a fic. Usually, he always ends up being "Wolframsexual". It's nice to have a change. Besides, I've always thought Yuuri was totally gay XD I really liked the part where you describe how he processed the info and dealt with the matter. Considering Yuuri's personnality, it was believable.
Well, all in all, well done, and thank you for sharing that wonderful piece of work with us. You've made a Wolyuu/Yuuram fan very happy ^_^

[melusine474]

Oh, yay, I'm very happy to oblige^^

And I'm very glad you liked Yuuri's gay angst XD

Thanks for reading and commenting and making me blush <3

[animekitty421]

that was really cute and wonderfully sexy ^_^ and your writing is as beautiful as always! i particularly liked the paragraph explaining Yuuri's slow acceptance of himself. you kept their characterizations really well in the dialogue, thoughts, and descriptions. i also liked that you fit in a wolfyuu and a yuuram!! ^_^ i guess my only critique/comment would be the length...it could have been fun to have a longer sex scene...but the current length emphasizes both the impatience after waiting for so long and the fact that it's their first time. it's a very fun, wonderfully written story, and i liked it a lot! Thanks for sharing!!

[melusine474]

^///^ Thank you! I'm so glad to hear you liked it and that I managed to keep up the characterizations, which is what I'm always most concerned about.

As for the length, I actually added a good deal to what I originally had planned in terms of the sex... I would have liked to draw it out more, but, well, I lack the skillz. ^^;;

Thanks for the thoughtful comment! <3