Omg I'm first comment here yay!~ *throws confetti* Well first off let me congratulate you on completing this amazing story. I know between this and the Ballad of the Invisible Boy you've put all of hard work into it and it indeed paid off. I'm the shy yet (bold?) fan who had sent a message to you earlier and here I am done reading the sequel like I said this won't be an epic comment for such an amazing story but thats mainly because I read your fic before class so I'm kinda rushing this cuz I have to go soon. But wow I mean you did amazing with the transition from IB to this the different characters not including the Winchesters or Bobby but everyone else in between. With the way you write I'm always able to picture everything while reading which is always a plus for me when a writer can do that. The emotions between both brothers was a roller coaster ride and heartbreaking a times to read mainly with Sam because from the previous story we all know how the poor boy struggled and he was never able to escape Dean. And Dean who we know
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Then they started up with each other and just the building tension between them being a mix of love and lust was driving me crazy to just read it unfolding but also had me wanting to beat the shit out of Dean when he slept with that random chick and then Cassie (that was canon but still). And poor Sam just ugh. But even before that his relationship with Jessica which I think you did a good job with their first time meeting and so forth it was nice. She gave him something even if she could never really fill that gaping hole that screamed DEAN in his heart she still helped him and REALLY loved him. Not gonna lie the dominating pegging!Jess was a bit awkward for me although it's not my first time reading that in regards to her but you did it tastefully even though poor Sammy always thought of Dean. And just the build up the rest of the way was great I like how you put Missouri in there she was a small character but I loved her on the show. Now towards the end around when Sam was finally opening up to Dean about why he did those things to
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Ugh my stupid iPhone manny or a few at least typos or wrong wording. This is what happens when I use my phone. Hope you can understand what I really am saying though bye!
Oh, man. Wincest has always been a hang-up. I took a chance on this, and WHOA. You've done so much with these characters. I love how you've anchored the dirtybadwrong in this place that feels like desperate love, and that both these boys tried so much along the way to make any other love work. It helped that you shared to two interludes with psychics to underline that these boys are inevitable.
I can't get over how you've managed to add this unquenchable lust between these two boys, this completely new element to the characters we know from the show, and yet you've kept them feeling authentic to the Sam and Dean we all love. These characters are so finely drawn and sympathetic and believable. And your writing is just gorgeous. Truly. So glad I read this.
Thank you so much for sharing this epic love story with us! You've written something extraordinary.
guh, i'm just speechless. thank you so much for this incredible comment. i'm so grateful you decided to give the fic a chance in spite of your reservations and i'm SO glad that you enjoyed it. thank you for reading and for taking the time to tell me this<33
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I can't get over how you've managed to add this unquenchable lust between these two boys, this completely new element to the characters we know from the show, and yet you've kept them feeling authentic to the Sam and Dean we all love. These characters are so finely drawn and sympathetic and believable. And your writing is just gorgeous. Truly. So glad I read this.
Thank you so much for sharing this epic love story with us! You've written something extraordinary.
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