Born to Run (Part 15/29)

[melungeoned]

Title: Born to Run
Part: 15/29
Characters: Sergio Ramos, Fernando Torres, Iker Casillas, Cesc Fábregas, David Beckham (various pairings)
Rating: NC-17 from here on out just to be safe.
Disclaimer: Tragically untrue.
Summary: Tramps like us, baby we were born to run.
Notes: Jess, I know there is a severe lack of Cesc here, but I have a whole thing

Comments

[ibythetide]

i can't lie. i think chickpea is the cutest nickname and i giggle a little every time david uses it. i know you could have used anyone in the world for nando's brother but it wouldn't feel the same if it wasn't david. the relationship you're building between them is very tender and the love there, after the horror they both went through, is really special to see.

CURIOUS ABOUT THE PLAN FOR CESC! what plan? are there schematics?

nando's pride in sergio and sergio's quiet support grabbed at my heart. it's real, you know?

Iker looks up at his mother and something about his expression makes her look away,

this grabbed at me too. even though iker is so excited to be home this feels important to me, and very sad. but i am selfishly glad sergio and iker had a moment together like this. iker at home, surrounded by the things he loves most. it's beautiful

[ancient_arch]

I wish I could read this series without crying every damn time.

These Southern boys speak to me. And they are so so Southern. You capture the south in them. Not just their words but in their actions, in the way Iker's mother is that mom who always made you feel welcomed when you went over to their house. It's warm just like the South. But it also has the darkness, the tragedy, the corners of their minds that you just don't want to go down because you will just be sitting somewhere some day and think about their story and cry.

David...reminds me of my brother. My heart aches in the fact that he reminds me so damn much of my brother.

It's good, love. It's amazing.

[quiteparadise]

What little Cesc there is is cute, though. I take comfort in that. And I am slowly coming to terms with the idea that Cesc really just doesn't belong. He is a sixteen-year-old runaway who probably needs to go home to his parents and make up for lost time. And to be honest, I've got the whole pathetic scenario worked out in my head. Because that's who I am. And I do care about this story. Really.

[robbie96]

oh,this was ..... so soft, so sweet .... it sounds weird - and I don't think I'm explaining it right but, it sounds like "home"....

I guess, I'm getting sentimental in my old age.....and I loved it! :'(

[parvardigar]

this was beautiful. all the layers of emotions in this are just breathtaking. david and fernando, david and iker, iker and fernando, iker and sergio, sergio and fernando, ....cesc and the baby calf....ahah. but no, seriously, i can't wait till you explore more into the david and fernando and iker relationships because the feelings there are so visceral they make me shiver a little bit.

i can tell how emotional and real this is for you and how much their lives and their stories mean to you and i think it's gorgeous.