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melodyprower11

Child at heart

Mar 31, 2011 03:18

Title: Child at Heart Chapter 7
Rating: PG-13 for language
Length: 1047 words
Pairing: HanHae
Summary: Han Geng thinks that Donghae would make a good little brother, and denies that his affections could lay in any other direction. Unfortunately for him, he may just find that you should be careful what you ask for, Some wishes ( Read more... )

fanfiction: child at heart, pairing:hanhae, super junior: fanfic

Comments 21

supa_luv_you56 March 31 2011, 08:05:00 UTC

Yayy Updated :DDDDD
I Loved this Chapter<3333 :)
Hae saying Saranghae Cute >,<
Hangeng is Finally Realizing his feelings For Hae :)
Thanks for Posting =)
Cant wait for the next Chapter<333 ^___^

melodyprower11 March 31 2011, 08:45:56 UTC

hehe~ Thank you! and thanks for reading <3

summer0smiles March 31 2011, 08:38:56 UTC

*flails* OH OF COURSE!!! KID!HAE THUS WAS BORN~~ XD Lol lol~ Awww, Hangeng should really be getting it already but *poof* he got it. Now, he could REALLY love Hae like a little brother! *glares*

*giggles* Tori... Saranghae!!! XD
<333

melodyprower11 March 31 2011, 08:45:26 UTC

yep! Kid!hae~ hahaha. He's starting to get it, but i think it'll take a little more pushing for him to finally fess up to himself. and yes, Hannie, be careful what you wish for. XD

I'm hoping i can make this flow in a somewhat believable (its kid!fic, it can't be totally seriously believable), ince the main focus of this fic is supposed to be Geng, Kid!Hae is important, but not the real 'point" of the fic.

I'm so nervous >.< I hope it works out.

hehehehe <3 <3 <3

summer0smiles March 31 2011, 12:36:42 UTC

*hugs* well, it's working! Hehe~ I'm looking forward to see how things will move on from here, now that Hae has turned into a kid... You've definitely grabbed the reader's attention with that. XD

Of course, and I'm guessing the whole main point of the fic would be that Geng's love for Hae is more than that of a little brother... Hm, anyhow, I'll be looking forward to the brewing storms. Lol.

<3

miracleshining March 31 2011, 09:39:51 UTC

I think you're off to a good start using this as a serious plot device. You've presented the story thus far with a strong base that this is a dramatic piece.

Though I'm sure that there will be charming and of course cute moments, I'm intrigued to see how this will go when we have an adult Geng still dealing with his feelings for a now child Hae.

I look forward to the developments and thank you!

melodyprower11 March 31 2011, 22:23:02 UTC

*sighs in relief* I was really worried this would throw people off, so thanks haha.

Ah! I'm feeling the pressure now! XD

Thanks for reading <3

us_jessica March 31 2011, 09:47:58 UTC

aww so CUTE!HAE I love the way he say saranghae
ahhh finally Geng realize that Hae loves him too
can't wait for the next chapter ^^
<333

melodyprower11 March 31 2011, 22:24:03 UTC

hehe, I'm glad you liked it! Yep Geng knows, now its up to him what he'll do with it.
thanks for reading <3

followurdestiny March 31 2011, 09:58:03 UTC

I was hoping this would be the case, kid!suju kid!Hae so adorable...
Hangeng will slowly realise his feelings and eventually he will have to admit to them and if it will make Hae turn back when the time comes ... The shock of this will be very amusing though, can't wait for the next chapter!! Hanhae <33 Fighting!

melodyprower11 March 31 2011, 22:26:30 UTC

aww~ were you ? then I'm glad i wrote it haha~

Thanks for reading! <3