Child At Heart

[melodyprower11]

Title: Child at Heart Chapter 4
Rating: PG-13 for language
Length: 1005  words
Pairing: HanHae
Summary: Han Geng thinks that Donghae would make a good little brother, and denies that his affections could lay in any other direction. Unfortunately for him, he may just find that you should be careful what you ask for, Some wishes have a nasty

Comments

[shihan_ai]

oh damn donghae is so hurt...he has to lie to get out of there D: and klsdfj i bet geng being all considerate is just making it harder...

and now geng's panicking and probably freaking out inside and aksdljfslsdskaf is he going to go search for hae? and then possibly have an accident and then hae will feel guitly and it'll be a massive cycle of guilt with a confession at the end

/clears throat

um :)

[melodyprower11]

yeah, poor Hae... TT.TT

hehehe, you'll just have to see won't you? I will tell you that you might not expect where the fic is headed. I know i keep saying this, but... well you'll find out in a few chapters XD

although i have to admit that your version sounds nice too XD

<3

thanks for reading~

[gunhaeree]

Whattttt?????
Haeeee ;;____;;
I somehow know that u probably crying somewhere..
Hannie!!! U supposed to know the reason why!!!
Pabo u two!!!
But I luph u Geng, u r so caring n gentle toward Hae ^/////^

Thank u for the update,
Waiting for the next chapter :D

[melodyprower11]

Hannie is remarkably dense sometimes >.<

and yeah he is. he just needs to realize WHY he acts that way already XD

Thanks for reading <3

[melodyprower11]

Don't worry you'll find out soon haha~

Thanks for reading <3

[irawrhae]

Aww poor Hae :((

Where are you fishy? Don't hurt urself, araso? :|

[melodyprower11]

I feel bad being mean to him TT.TT

hehe, thanks for reading~

[summer0smiles]

//stares blankly at my screen//

Hae sweetie... T_T
*glares at you*
Hm! I'm not talking to you.

............
aihesifhwsaifjhaojeolajpoaisdjoiadjfpaojrepoij
okay, maybe I'm just gonna finish what I NEED to say first.

Hae's hurt and missing, Geng's concerned and pulling his hairs out in desperation. Hae's hurt, Geng might be realising his feelings for Hae soon. Hae's hurt, more of Geng's POV on next chapter (???).

Hae's still hurt and your fic is really giving me a mental breakdown! AND HAE'S STILL MISSING!

Okay, I'm done. Not talking to you~

[melodyprower11]

Awwwwww. I love you? you know you love me too~

Yeah I'm feeling a little guilty... tell me missy, how did YOU feel all those times you killed Geng, Huh? and left poor Hae all alone and sad, huh?

XD

also, no. Next chapter is Hae again. think on that for a few days lol.

Come onnnn~ You can't not talk to me forever. may I'll just kill Hae instead, huh? I wasn't planning on it, buuuuuuuut~ *smirks evilly*

[summer0smiles]

*more tears coming up* So you're taking revenge right now???

LOL~

Oh I see... Hae's POV would be a treat too. I NEED TO KNOW WHAT'S HE THINKING GOING MISSING LIKE THAT!

NONONONONO!! *begging* Oh look, I just talked to you! So no murdering should ever take place anywhere in your fic! Huhuhu~~

Or...
Aha~ I'm currently working on a HanHae one shot now~~~ Don't do anything to Hae or I'll do something to Hannie~~

HAHAHA I laughing at how we're threatening each other like that!

[melodyprower11]

I'm not taking revenge.... I'm just giving in to my sick twisted tendencies XD. although since you were mean to Geng so much, I have to admit I'm laughing in satisfaction at your reaction ^^ paybacks a bitch~

XDD

*sing songs* you'll have to waaaaiiiit~

hehehehe. Okay I won't kill hae... for now. ^^

AH NO DON'T KILL GENG. POOR HAE IS ALREADY BEING TORURED ENOUGH IN MY FIC! can you reaaaaallly do that to our poor fishie? right now he thinks Geng doesn't love him, and then you'll Kill Geng on top of that? Shame on you.

XD it's cuz we wuvs each others XDDDD lol that sounds so odd.