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ssw_loved August 7 2011, 16:31:30 UTC
This is beautiful and gorgeous. I woke up to the email saying this was posted and read it first thing, and then sgain when i was actually awake - which was right now. I could feel their grief. The doctor has lost so many people and to lose a child now, when he has before... And river, oh, river.

Excellent job, <3

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melodypondx August 7 2011, 18:26:14 UTC
Aww, I'm very glad that you liked it and hope I did your prompt justice! :)

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the_silverdoe August 7 2011, 18:13:04 UTC
Heart-breaking.
But this is so beautiful, I love that he wanted to name the baby 'Shadow' from the regret he feels over the life he and River never had and will never have.
Once again, very good job!

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melodypondx August 7 2011, 18:26:30 UTC
Thankyou! :D

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philippa_1988 August 9 2011, 11:22:32 UTC
Hearbreakingly sad, but beautifully written. Poor River and poor Doctor :(

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melodypondx August 9 2011, 22:51:36 UTC
Thank you!

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coffee_mill August 14 2011, 23:02:47 UTC
Oh gosh. It's so heart-crushing, but so damn beautiful.
Wonderful <3.

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melodypondx August 15 2011, 18:22:40 UTC
Oh, thank you!

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honeynoir August 23 2011, 19:59:05 UTC
Lovely! This is beautifully written!

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melodypondx September 4 2011, 21:58:31 UTC
Thank you :)

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