Fic: Never Quite Enough (11/River)

Aug 03, 2011 23:16


Title: Never Quite Enough
Characters/Pairings: Doctor Who, River/Eleven
Rating: T
Wordcount: 1, 288

He needed to say goodbye )

river song

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artemis_ephesus August 3 2011, 22:44:07 UTC
Aww, this is so heartbreaking. I've always wondered whether the doctor was doing the right thing in keeping River "alive" in the virtual reality of CAL. I can't imagine her being happy there, really. This works really well on that level. Very poignant.

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melodypondx August 7 2011, 18:41:12 UTC
Thank you! :)

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the_silverdoe August 4 2011, 06:19:56 UTC
Absolutely beautiful. Oh, River...
He wanted them to be happy. Just for once, because they never really had been. One had always been hiding something from the other, stopping them from being truly happy; yet now they knew as much as each other and there was still something stopping them.
I can't help thinking that about them; it's a sad thought but it seems to be their fate.
Aw, my heart is broken. But beautiful story nonetheless! :)

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melodypondx August 7 2011, 18:41:36 UTC
Oops, sorry, I should really consider writing something happy for once!

Thank you! :D

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the_silverdoe August 7 2011, 18:48:00 UTC
I wasn't complaining, I love sad stories (more than happy ones) and you write them beautifully. :P

On another note, I really like your new icon. ;)

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melodypondx August 7 2011, 18:59:56 UTC
Oh, I adore sad stories, a lot more than happy ones :£
Aw, thanks >.<

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melodypondx August 7 2011, 18:43:10 UTC
Oh, thank you for such a detailed comment, I don't think I've ever got one so detailed lol! Thank you very much.

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