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Rolling in the Deep (7/?)

May 18, 2014 17:08

Rolling in the Deep

Title: Rolling in the DeepSeries: Still Waters (Run Deep) (Part III of IV)
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fanfiction, omegaverse, rolling in the deep, still waters (run deep), bbc!sherlock, mystrade, bdsm, john/sherlock

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charisstoma May 18 2014, 16:48:29 UTC

Put like that, Greg's been receiving since he and Mycroft 'came' together; it's not how you're being had, it's who's having who as in domming. That was a very nice way of giving Greg guidance in his new sexual position.
Sherlock as an uncle is cute and he's getting excellent practice in parenting if and when he and John do get pregnant.
*grins* John shutting the door in Greg's face because he's got an important Sherlock to do.

melody_in_time May 18 2014, 22:14:32 UTC

Gender identity is something I don't think would ever really have been expertise in this au. After all, if you're an alpha dating an omega why would you bottom when they are designed for it? Greg is going to have just a bit of trouble getting used to the idea that's for sure.

I decided we, and the world in general, needed more John/sherlock smut. Therefore next chapter we have smut. The change in pov is part of why this one was so short

charisstoma May 19 2014, 01:18:15 UTC

*GRINS* John/sherlock smut. Oh I think I can suffer through that quite well.

melody_in_time May 19 2014, 02:26:42 UTC

I didn't think you'd mind all that much ... :p

Headcanon is filled with rape!!! livikate May 19 2014, 15:41:49 UTC

Okay, hi, I read over on Ao3, and I've got to say, the weeks between chapters for me are spent obsessing over my headcanon of what will happen in the next chapter. And I have to admit, my headcanon for this story is getting very dark and very rapey. Greg is not into this, and I really don't see him getting used to it. And he doesn't have a safe word so there's no way he can communicate that to Mycroft. His Alpha won't let him enjoy is and his sub will make him feel like a failure for not appreciating what his Dom is giving him. Why didn't Sherlock realize the distress? He wasn't embarrassed he was panicked and ashamed. In my headcanon, and this is just my headcanon, where I get ahead of you by a couple chapters and this is just my version of future events, but I see Greg remembering the very beginning of their relationship when Myc told him no safe words, and that he would always know Greg's limits and what he wanted and what he didn't. I see this conversation turning into Greg thinking that Mycroft knows he hates bottoming and is ( ... )

Re: Headcanon is filled with rape!!! melody_in_time May 22 2014, 23:02:35 UTC

Hey sorry I hadn't responded before now. I missed the notification that you'd commented.

Certainly what you described above is something I was trying with and we almost did go down that route before I reminded myself I was trying to fix their relationship not destroy it completely. I was close though.

There will be more for you to ruminate on in a couple of weeks. We're going to have a John and sherlock interlude first just to break it up a bit.

Loved hearing your ideas though, by the by. I do that for so many fics I'm reading!

Re: Headcanon is filled with rape!!! livikate June 30 2014, 02:00:13 UTC

I can't wait to see how you're going to turn this into relationship fixing, mostly because I can't possibly imagine, but I sincerely cannot wait! Hope Chapter 12 comes soon!

Re: Headcanon is filled with rape!!! melody_in_time June 30 2014, 02:16:26 UTC

It will be a challenge, that's for sure. The next chapter is raready in just waiting to get it back from my beta. Coordinating one person's schedule is hard, two when one is many time zones ahead is really interesting. Ut should be finally going up today though.

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