Flames (Oneshot)

Jul 26, 2011 16:46



Flames (Oneshot)

There was smoke; so much smoke. The sky was blackened with the fumes, and the only pigment of color were the orange flames licking at the edges of the dark blanket overhead. The fire was getting angry-it wanted to play. There were several people screaming, running around and lashing out at police officials trying to contain the ( Read more... )

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catherine_leite August 3 2011, 16:04:07 UTC
wow.
it sounded like it's coming from a real incident. was it?
wow. the ending... *shivered*

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melody0606 August 3 2011, 18:08:16 UTC
No, thankfully it's not based off a real incident. This piece is so sad - WHY DID I WRITE SUCH A SAD PIECE?! T.T The last line was the deal breaker T.T

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