Analysis of a short story called "Bill in a Bucket"

[melluransa]

For an assignment for school in which we have to analyze a story and its elements, I wrote a little tidbit about Bill and Tom, and analyzed it. More goes into a story episode than you think! You have to have certain story grammar elements for a story to be considered complete, and you have to add even more (we call it "story sparkle") to make your

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[zeph317toho]

This was so cute! I want a Bill in a bucket!

You did a great job with the little story and the analysis. I hope you get a great grade for it. Plus, the doodle is precious. <3

[melluransa]

Maybe you can find one! Just look closely for little friends in little places!

Thanks! I'm hoping so. This is an effective way to make us learn, by making us do it. I could totally evaluate some little kid's story and use it to help me determine if he has a language disorder.

[fyredancer]

Aww, this is so adorable! I want to muss his little head! <3

[melluransa]

Aww, thank you! :3

[elizabeth21r]

So cute! So adorable! Awaaaa n_n I really liked the explaining of the story parts too!

[melluransa]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked the story structure analysis.

[tinie]

This is amazingly sweet, fun, and enticing. And educational. The drawing is so cute and the whole post so lovely.

[melluransa]

You used so many interesting adjectives in your comment! I'm glad you liked it so much!

[kseenaa]

Awwww... :-D That was beyond cute! And the little drawing just helped to draw me in! AWESOME!

Was interesting to see the buildup of a story to!

[melluransa]

Thanks! Stories are very specific as to what is required. There's a lot more going on than you think!