Comments | mello_bello_91: One False Slip

mello_bello_91

One False Slip

Jul 13, 2009 23:37

Title: One False Slip ( Read more... )

character: jake anderson, thrid person, pairing: edgar/jake, deadliest catch, title: o, rating: g, character: edgar hansen

Comments 6

mandolin13 July 17 2009, 06:40:07 UTC

I am so friending you...I'd write something more coherent then I like it, but I'm currently on pain pills thanks to my dentist, so forgive the lack of anything constructive. :)

mello_bello_91 July 17 2009, 17:27:22 UTC

No big, and I applude you for even being able to type when on pain pills.. I'd just want to sleep

asnowyowl July 17 2009, 10:20:51 UTC

Really nice. Their emotions and the way they handle them are very realistic and very male.

mello_bello_91 July 17 2009, 17:30:23 UTC

Thank you very much! ^_^ I rewrote this one so many times because I didn't like Jake's thought process....so I'm glad you like it!

amelia_17 August 4 2009, 22:25:39 UTC

I loved this! And for the record:
"I love you too, Junior." = sweetest line ever

mello_bello_91 August 5 2009, 03:18:55 UTC

Thank you! And, we share the same name!

-Amelia-