Comments | mello_bello_91: Paper Chase

mello_bello_91

Paper Chase

Jun 16, 2010 22:12

Title: Paper Chase ( Read more... )

diva-off, character: kurt hummel, title: p, pairing: kurt/puck, character: puck, rating: g

Comments 8

profoundrice June 17 2010, 10:23:46 UTC

Oh. <333333 This is adorable and put a massive smile on my face because it made me think of everything I love about summer. (:

mello_bello_91 June 21 2010, 23:55:40 UTC

Yay! I'm glad it could make you smile!

Thank you for reading!

ollyhollywolly June 17 2010, 17:48:03 UTC

How very romantic of Puck!
& I live less than 10 minutes away from Niagara Falls,so I love this even more!

mello_bello_91 June 21 2010, 23:56:13 UTC

Oh! Lucky! I love Niagara Falls! It's such a pretty place!

And thank you for reading!

na_shao June 17 2010, 20:30:27 UTC

So adorable ♥ I just love this, made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside ... :D

mello_bello_91 June 21 2010, 23:56:38 UTC

I'm glad you liked it!

Thank you for reading!

tamzinrose June 21 2010, 17:10:59 UTC

This was adorkable <3

[but just a minor con-crit point: your tenses slip a bit throughout]

mello_bello_91 June 21 2010, 23:59:44 UTC

O.O someone else who says Adorkable! YAY! :D

And yeah... it's one of my biggest problems when I write. I'm really bad at tenses... I'm trying to get better at not doing it... Thank you for pointing it out though! I'm always open to con-crit!

And thank you for reading!