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mellaithwen

Frayed Ends Of Sanity, 3/?

Sep 25, 2006 18:09

Title: Frayed Ends Of Sanity
Author: mellaithwen
Chapters: 3/?
Rating: R (Gen)
Warnings: Spoilers for Devil's Trap. Only spec for season 2, no spoilers.
Summary: Post Devil's Trap. Everything has an aftermath...

So when you're ill you curl up in bed, moan, and generally get waited on hand and foot, right?

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storyfrayed, fanfic, supernatural

Comments 28

cariadean September 25 2006, 19:00:51 UTC

Lovely story - really enjoying it ...
I love how you've gotten Dean all choked up about his absent father and, even though I'm not a great fan of the boys' dad, I also loved how John referred to Dean as his 'little boy' - maybe there is a bit of a heart in there after all ...
Great work - hopefully more soon?

mellaithwen September 26 2006, 17:29:06 UTC

soon you say, ah well...trying but yah *cough*

hehe I didn't even notice the little boy until AFTER when my beta squee'd over it. Came naturally o.O

apieceofcake September 25 2006, 19:22:47 UTC

>> Also, does anyone know why I'm not appearing on ANYONE's flist??

No..I was wondering why I didn't get the first parts :-(..or this. Don't know how to fix it either..sorry.

Another good chapter, thanks :-)

mellaithwen September 26 2006, 17:29:30 UTC

okay so far I think its fixed itself :|

no problem lol!

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mellaithwen September 26 2006, 17:29:40 UTC

glad you thought so still!

faye_dartmouth September 26 2006, 00:44:05 UTC

HEY! LOOK! Dean woke up!! I'm sure all my yelling was very useful.

And now what are they getting themselves into...I love Sam's introspection, trying to figure out if the vagueness of his visions are useful, if staying away from the motel will help prevent the things he's seen. That's part of the burden of the gift--to see things means to prevent them and if he can't, then his failure is even more bitter.

Looking forward to more!!

mellaithwen September 26 2006, 17:31:25 UTC

VERY useful, if not just because it was annoying me enough to wake Dean up with my pen XD

plus a lot of his visions fail (not meant to sound negative) but like jenny banging on the window; that HAPPENED, decapitation HAPPENED, um...knife didn't happen and head!shot didn't happen, but still o.O 2 against 2

I should hope so too :D hehe, and yo' spoiler ho, ya seen the clip??

faye_dartmouth September 26 2006, 18:40:46 UTC

HEY!!!! Annoying? Me? I was just being ENTHUSIASTIC. Trying to get INTO the story. *pouts*

And you're right about his visions. He's managed to prevent some, but not nearly all, and that's got to suck being him. I think he needs a hug. I volunteer.

Me? Seen the spoiler clip? What makes you think I'd do something like that...

FINE. I did. I admit it. But I've already know everything about this ep, I figured, why bother holding out now? I hereby resolve, though, to know nothing specific beyond ep 8. Okay? I'm going to TRY. HARD. But don't hate me if I fail...

mellaithwen September 26 2006, 23:17:21 UTC

...too late to say I was kidding...?

it all adds up to the guilt machine that is Samuel Winchester!! You hug Sammy, I'll hug Dean while he angsts for some reason...

well its not technically a spoiler, I mean I knew they were gonna be in hospital :| so...no spoiling :D (NO spoiling *happy glare as to stop you from contradicting me*) I've watched it too much, know the words *facepalm*

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iamthedirtgirl September 26 2006, 07:16:03 UTC

um, you've been showing up on my flist. Sometimes it's a hiccup, I also know if you backdate an entry those entry's don't show up on the flists. I'll go back through and check again to make sure this actually showed up as coming from your journal and not a community just to be sure.

Love these chapters hon. Am really getting off on the tense thing you've got going on with Sam having these new visions. The whole thing is just, well you know how much i love it when you write dean hurt and I love sam being there and knowing his brother so well that he knows what needs to be done when dean wakes up all panicked and how he waits for dean to ask. And just really all of it. I am no good at giving good feedback lately. My rl is all in introverted quiet like behavior lately. Just love this and am glad you've got us all going on a great new ride.

mellaithwen September 26 2006, 17:32:41 UTC

Started off writing and it was essentially all Dean angst and only Sam angst in response to his brother's angst, so I tried to balance it out and I swear there's more Sam than Dean which worries me greatly...but hmm...

quiet behaviour? everything okay?

iamthedirtgirl September 29 2006, 01:43:11 UTC

thanks for asking, and no, everything isn't ok. just trying to get through right now. ya know, it's ok if there is more sam than dean, just so long as it's not ALL the time. tee hee.

mellaithwen September 29 2006, 18:44:40 UTC

*hugs*

lol theres a lot of dean-centric eps so I don't mind so much