Frayed Ends Of Sanity, 2/?

[mellaithwen]

Title: Frayed Ends Of Sanity
Author: mellaithwen
Chapters: 2/?
Rating: R (Gen)
Warnings: Spoilers for Devil's Trap. Only spec for season 2, no spoilers.
Summary: Post Devil's Trap. Everything has an aftermath...

Thank you Pixel!

Part One

Part Two

“Dean, you got the gun? Give it to me,” John asks and commands at the same time, his hand held out. Dean

Comments

[mellaithwen]

two wow's--lucky me :D

aww the puppy dog eyes!

[ewanspotter]

Fab as usual. Can't wait to see how you finish this. I'm thinking of it as a nice little morse of a story to keep me tided over until the premiere. :)

[mellaithwen]

lol I thought that too :) I'm not sure if I'll have finished by Thursday but dammit I'm trying! thanks again dude :)

[pixel_0]

A little bit late here...but, I am here, box of Kleenex and all. Heh. They're my new friend. I'll name them. Beans. Yes, Beans the box o' Kleenex and me.

And I honestly haven't taken any cold medicine, because if I had, I would write that whole babbling off as crazy talk.

Dr. Jesson is called in

The first time I read this, I honestly thought it said, "Dr. Jensen" and I went, "Dr. Who?!" lol.

I think my favorite part in this chapter was John telling Sam about young Dean. There's so many arguments around fandom that Dean is the bridge to keep Sam and John from killing each other, and I like how they're bonding over Dean. It's weird, really, how each of them knows a different side than the other one knows.

Very good chapter, although I'm looking forward to the next one. ;) *claps hands excitedly* It's so nice to read these without going, "Damn you, comma" and "Screw you, Mr. Period!" *pets the pretty fic*

All right, Beans and I are off to go edit my Sam and Dean with swords fic.

Okay, I think I'm just tired. Not completely drug

[mellaithwen]

LMFAO thats how lame I am, I'm sitting here racking my brains for names, and thats all I get, because I'm thinking of Jensen, and all's I got's is jesson. *facepalm*

I hate Mr. Period, such an arrogant arse, and don't get me STARTED on Mr. Comma (we all know he's a guy)

bye bye Beans *waves*

professional? LMAO

^^ kidding, don't let Beans trick you into thinking me vindictive!

[apieceofcake]

Just read both parts * happy sigh*. Loving it :-)

[mellaithwen]

welcome to the world of insanity, please grab the box of tissues on the way in because apparently it makes people cry :|

(and hallo, thank you e.t.c.)

[iamthedirtgirl]

i have fallen so far behind in my reading. I am going back and starting this from the beginning. You've got a lot of good stuff going on here. Building something wonderful I suspect. You just really hit it hard with the line

“Sir!” she says firmly. “Your son suffered-”

Suffered.

My son suffered.

that broke me in everything it said about that incident in the cabin and how John feels about it. I loved it. Then that flashback to Dean as a kid, a soldier, never being given the order to stand down. so he just didn't. you just know that kid stayed awake for that whole two days until his dad woke up and that's heartbreaking.

The conversation about how John doesn't know Dean. It's incredibly moving. I like how you have Sam try to fill in the gaps a bit. I'm not thrilled with John for leaving, and of course he goes and Sam is being hit with a whole new list of problems. This is all just really great story telling a wonderfull setup. Just wanted to say. And now I'm off to continue reading until daylight or tiredness kicks in.

[mellaithwen]

wow thanks dude :)