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mellaithwen

Frayed Ends Of Sanity, 5/?

Oct 09, 2006 19:00

Title: Frayed Ends Of Sanity
Chapters: 5/?
Warnings: R, Gen. Only s2 spec--no spoilers.
Summary: AU. Post Devil's Trap. Everything has an aftermath...

Sorry for the wait guys. And again
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storyfrayed, fanfic, supernatural

Comments 22

cariadean October 9 2006, 19:23:26 UTC

I loved the verbal volleyball between Dean and Sam - that so brings back memories of how my sister and I would be during a semi-serious row... You got the tone just right to make the whole thing both believable and humourous. That whole scene is just such a Sam and Dean thing - loved it.
Then you go and make things serious again at the end ... need more asap ... (pretty please)

mellaithwen October 10 2006, 19:27:21 UTC

lol thanks :) I'll try to hurry up with part 6!

eponin10 October 10 2006, 01:18:43 UTC

Oh my. *dies laughing* What great dialogue. You got Sam and Dean spot on in character. That was hysterical.

mellaithwen October 10 2006, 19:27:36 UTC

thanks -- glad you enjoyed!

iamthedirtgirl October 10 2006, 09:54:24 UTC

more goodness here. I really liked how dean had that reaction to hearing his dad's voice. there are so many ways to go with that situation, so many that fit and this was definitely one of them and I liked it. I liked that we didn't get to be involved in the conversation. You're nailing these characters. It's wonderful. The brotherly interaction was fun. I enjoyed it sooo much. I love that Sam just could not keep his hands to himself and *whacks him in the head* taking the thing with him, the geek. You really did a nice job of keeping the thread of what they are dealing overall on a subtle level. Dean wanting to research, like I had no clue it had started snowing in hell. then with sam being wrong about the hellhounds and dean figuring it out and what it all turned out to be and just when you think, ah story over till next chappie we get the creepifying rhyme and the broken tv. HOT DAMN! you know how to bring things full circle and close out a chapter. loved it. look forward to more. *hugs*

mellaithwen October 10 2006, 19:28:59 UTC

lol :) had a lot of fun doing the banter so glad you enjoyed it too. I'm always worried I make the boys too dramatic :S but eh there we go lol! thanks again hun!

ewanspotter October 10 2006, 20:27:54 UTC

Finally caught up. Okay, the entire hellhound scene was freakin' amazing. You totally nailed the boys (in an appropriate way of course). I'd pay Kripke to see that one on screen. lol

I've read a lot of post finale stories, but can't think of any that dealt with Dean being afraid of John after what the demon did, so I'm glad this story talked about. I'd be pretty freaked out if the last time I heard my dad he all Mr. Yellow Eyes.

Powerful ending.

mellaithwen October 11 2006, 06:21:38 UTC

LMAO! Oh I'd love to nail the boys in the non appropriate way but that needs a whole other rating ;) would love to see like ten minutes of just banter

really? I thought a lot more people would :S I mean...he's dressed as Dad...torturing his son o.O

thanks!

ewanspotter October 11 2006, 07:19:47 UTC

Well, yes, we'd ALL love to nail them. Oh wait, you mean in fic, don't you? Uh. Yeah. In fic. >.>

I thought a lot more people would :S I mean...he's dressed as Dad...torturing his son

I'm not saying there aren't those stories out there or that people haven't written about it. But it doesn't seem to be one of the "big issues" that pops up. Does that make any sense? Maybe they just all came out right after the finale and it's been so long my brain has forgotten. Oh well. Doesn't matter. ;)

mellaithwen October 11 2006, 16:05:50 UTC

Who said anything about fic? mwahaha >:D

hmm maybe :) wish the show hadn't done what it did, and then we could get it on there *sigh*

kimonkey7 October 11 2006, 08:40:51 UTC

I'm awfully, terribly behind in my fic reading, which I guess is what happens to me when I'm all fic-writing-ery...but, so, and alas...I've just found this story.

I really should have reviewed as I read each chap, but I just kept clicky-clicking and ready-reading...*g*...but now I've reached the end of what's here.

*makes pouty lips*

All of that to say, really digging this. There are a lot of lines that made me smile or pause or say 'yes, yes' but it's oh, so late...and you'll just have to believe me when I say, 'More, please. Soon, please.'

mellaithwen October 11 2006, 16:07:00 UTC

Definately know what you mean; though at the moment I'm doing more reading than writing (not a good idea when starting a big ass fic)

lol I believe you :D glad you liked! It's okay for not reviewing each one lol, its easier for me to reply to one