[fic] An infinite capacity for self-deception (3/?)

[melissa_42]

Title: An infinite capacity for self-deception (3/?)
Fandom: Latin Hetalia
Characters: Martina (fem!Argentina), Luciana (fem!Brazil), The Green Eyed Monster, Sebastián (Uruguay), Daniel (Paraguay), Manuela (fem!Chile)
Pairings: mainly Martina/Luciana...and some others...
Rating: PG-ish
Warnings: Human AU and some swearing.

Summary: Laundry day is always

Comments

PLACEHOLDEEEEER

[ilye_aru]

I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS FIC I WANT TO MARRY THIS FIC

Re: PLACEHOLDEEEEER

[melissa_42]

You have to tell me what you think of Manuela (even though she barely there) because I don't know what I'm doing with herrrrrr. ;__;

[berseker]

… you know, I just realized that the world needs more jealousy stories. This is EPIC.

Martína is so intense, and I keep going from wanting to shake her to wanting to hug her and give her chocolate. And Luci is perfect. I like how consistent she is, even if we only see her from Tina's pov, and she doesn't always get her. And aw Dani. And Sebas. And the laundry. And Luci's panties, and Martína's reaction to it. It's so hilarious and weirdly hot.

Also, I love the cousins. This is all so real, the way they interact, and how they care about each other, and... everything. And I feel like that about all the relationships here, they're all so real (btw girl Manu is perfect. Such a helpful friend).

I loved this chapter ♥

[melissa_42]

Can I admit that the entire impetus for writing this story came from the realization that at some point in time, all the cousins wanted Luci? I really like writing the family interaction. Despite their differences, they work together so well. Even though they want to strangle each other sometimes, but isn't that how all families are? xD

♥♥

[sipmiau]

I'm just going to sit here until I find words to say how much I love this and how you write.

[melissa_42]

You're too kind. ;__; I'm glad you like it!

[sipmiau]

I'm not. I just really love this. And Martina, I want to hug her so bad Dx

[melissa_42]

Thank you! Yes, she definitely needs a hug. ♥

[aluha]

D:

Now I'm feeling really sorry for Martina! She's so sweet and confused and maybe Sebas and Manu should be more SPECIFIC, cuz she obviously doesn't seem to understand what they're trying to say.

Poor Tininha. I hope Lulu will kiss her and everything'll be fine <33

Besides that, it's so beautiful how everything flows so naturally <3

[melissa_42]

She can be a little dense at times, plus she is confused, so I can't blame her for not understanding what's going on.

She'll get her kiss....eventually....

Thank you!