[fic] Fortuna brevis - Gokudera; Yamamoto/Gokudera

[melissa_42]

Title: Fortuna brevis
Characters: Gokudera-centric, Yamamoto/Gokudera, vague Gokudera/OC
Rating: R
Warnings: Language, mafia violence, character deaths
Word count: 5,000~
Summary: Sometimes Gokudera feels like he’s the butt of a malicious celestial joke. Sometimes he knows he is.
A/N: This vaguely follows the multi-verse concept, so each section takes

Comments

[magicasen]

Yay, multi-verse, I love that approach so much and you did it very well. I really, really liked your characterization of Gokudera, especially for #3 and #4. Which is why if I had to pick my favorite, I'd go with those 2 along with #1. Okay, okay, really I loved them all. Even if they twisted my heart into tiny little pieces. Thank you for ending it on a good note, at least Gokudera is 1 for 5!

[melissa_42]

I'm glad you thought the characterization was good; I was a little worried that I'd made him too angsty and whiny.

I couldn't give a bad ending after all I'd put him through. D:

Thanks for commenting!

[faorism]

God, this is so lovely! I adore the repetition here and there that brings this fiction together, and I adore the different scenarios you've set up. Especially the last one!

[melissa_42]

I'm a sucker for repetition. Thanks for commenting!

[mychemical_lust]

Wow - this was a really neat read - I've never read anything like that before, I think. Gosh, this was awesome♥

[melissa_42]

Thanks! I'm not usually one for character death, but I wanted to try it. :'(

[azurecerulean]

IC as always

Aww, poor little Gokudera...

I usually don't enjoy fic with OC pairing, but this is an exception. Great story! ♥

[melissa_42]

I'm glad you think so, I was a little worried about making Gokudera too mopey.

I felt a little bad killing him off, but he got one happy ending... ;__;

Yeah, there aren't many canon female characters to pair him with, and I don't like using one of them as the 'bad guy', so I figured a random OC could help move the plot.

Thanks for commenting!

[melissa_42]

Baby Gokudera's death was totally not inspired by this...I mean...

I'm horrible at writing true angst because I can never not end with something that's semi-happy, or at least hopeful.

Thanks for commenting!