[fic] Smallprint - Byakuran/Yamamoto

[melissa_42]

Title: Smallprint
Characters: Byakuran/Yamamoto
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: General creepiness, dub-con, pedophilia, and spoilers for chapter 328
Word count: 1500~
Summary: Yamamoto knows there has to be a catch in Byakuran’s offer because games like this always have such complicated rules.
A/N: Written for khrfest 6, prompt Byakuran/Yamamoto - savior; "It'll cost

Comments

[nervousvenus]

adjf;alksdjf;s this is just awesome. It's beautiful and horrifying and creepy and I am in love with everything about it, your writing is so pretty. And that ending is just perfect. The whole thing was full of gorgeous lines, but I think the ending was my favorite. That's some good stuff, there.

[melissa_42]

Creepy is exactly what I was going for (I think I creeped myself out while writing it). Thank you commenting, I'm really glad you liked it!

[amcw177]

This is wonderfully creepy! Just like Byakuran should be ;) And you got Yamamoto's train of thought down so well. I loved it! \o/

[melissa_42]

Hnnnn thank you! Yeah, I couldn't be assed to reread the chapters Byakuran was in, so I went with creepy + calculating + musical notes for his characterization... I guess it worked? XD Is it sad that I kind of still hope that Yama is being manipulated in the manga, even if shounen law states that former antagonists must be Jesus'd?

[amcw177]

LOL You obviously remembered him well then.

And rest assured, you're not the only one hoping for a twist in Yamamoto's miraculous recovery. It would be epic but I am equally doubtful it will happen *sadface*

[melissa_42]

Shounen law 28: friends = conscience

It's like that moment when you realize you've fucked up but there's nothing you can do about it besides think about how your loved ones are going to react when they find out. D:

(Also, take a moment to picture mini Tsuna and Gokudera flailing around on Yamamoto's shoulders.)

[melissa_42]

Thanks for commenting!

[thania_hinata]

<3 <3 <3
awesome fic, awesome author!~

[melissa_42]

>///< Thank you!