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melissa_42

[fic] Un sorriso per me

Mar 26, 2010 01:55

Title: Un sorriso per me
Characters: Gokudera & Bianchi
Rating: PG
Prompt: khrfest II-57. Gokudera - predictable; "It was a dark and stormy night--"
Word Count: 558
Disclaimer: Katekyo Hitman Reborn! belongs to Amano Akira.
Summary: Bianchi tries to tell her little brother a fairy tale.

A/N: I wrote this before chapter 282, so I had to revise it a little ( Read more... )

f: katekyo hitman reborn!, c: gokudera hayato, gen, fanfic, c: bianchi, khrfest

Comments 9

kchanlp March 26 2010, 03:12:39 UTC

The boy sat up and hugged one of the pillows to his chest. “Does he not like me?” << FFFFFFFFFFFF OK I'm taking little Gokudera home and hugging him, like, forever. ♥

This was so cuuute~ Excellent work! <3

melissa_42 March 26 2010, 10:07:58 UTC

Thanks! Little Gokudera needs lots of hugs ^^

demoerin March 30 2010, 04:14:50 UTC

This is an interesting look to how Gokudera's dad might have viewed him, especially since Bianchi's revelation in canon did not actually clear that many things up, so this is still plausible and rather fascinating. I really love the last paragraph, because Gokudera did grow up enraged and bitter - but it is true that he still has a lot of love under that, and I adore that Bianchi sees it so easily.

melissa_42 March 30 2010, 10:32:06 UTC

Yeah, even if it was revealed that Gokudera's family loved him, that doesn't make his past any less heartbreaking. It makes me happy that he's still a good kid inside even with all that anger. And Bianchi is a good sister (even if she does try to poison him from time to time) ^^

Thanks for reading!

ale_dono April 7 2010, 19:17:19 UTC

*.* So cute!

A wonderful, yet very simple fic. ^^ One of those that say many things in very few words. Congrats!

melissa_42 April 10 2010, 15:00:50 UTC

Thanks!

wild_ocean April 15 2010, 19:45:40 UTC

I loved this , it was IC and sweet and touching :)

came here from tomomichi's rec!

melissa_42 April 16 2010, 11:37:34 UTC

Aww, thanks! I'm glad you both liked it!

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melissa_42 April 23 2010, 08:53:54 UTC

Oh wow, thanks!! I tend to have an easier time writing humor rather than more emotional fics, so it's really nice to hear that you like this one. I usually just write 8059 (if you hadn't noticed), but genfic can be fun, and I absolutely love Bianchi and her interaction with her brother.

So once again, thank you very much for the compliment! I really appreciate it!!