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melificent811

Learning to Fly (4/?)

Sep 28, 2008 20:22

TITLE: Learning to Fly (4/?)
AUTHOR: MelDomingo
RATING: NC-17
PAIRING: Callie/Erica
SUMMARY: Set after the season 4 finale kiss. Coming out can be quite the rocky journey...
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Grey's Anatomy or its characters. No infringement intended..

Previous chapters here:
CHAPTER ONE, CHAPTER TWO, CHAPTER THREE

( CHAPTER FOUR )

fanfic, learning to fly, callica

Comments 8

docwarnerfan September 29 2008, 08:56:58 UTC

Loved this.

nelfy September 29 2008, 12:23:03 UTC

great update, I really like where you're going with the story. I hope you'll keep writing, I loved how erica took care of callie and their sweet moment when she kissed her!

melificent811 September 29 2008, 21:11:37 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad the story as a whole is flowing well together. It makes me so happy that you enjoyed that sweet little moment. This particular chapter was like extracting blood from a stone. Everything was a bit difficult to write... except that one moment! THANKS!

x0xmarie0x0 September 29 2008, 13:47:20 UTC

It's so cute, I really do love it !
Can't wait for the next chapter ! !xxx

sapphicwarrior September 29 2008, 17:43:04 UTC

it was worth the waiting! loved it :-), can't wait to read what will happen next!

melificent811 September 29 2008, 21:12:15 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for continuing to read =-)

lestobiosis September 29 2008, 18:28:56 UTC

Aw! Erica carefully undressing her and the kiss... So sweet and tender. That was such a wonderfully loving, romantic moment.
This wasn't disjointed at all - it was a nice respite from Callie's frantic fears, and well timed. It made sense in the grand scheme of things and felt like a nice starting off point for the next chapter.
(Hint, hint. Yay upcoming next chapter!)

melificent811 September 29 2008, 21:14:20 UTC

I'm glad it didn't come across as disjointed from the rest of the series. I had put it down for so long that I was REALLY worried that it just wouldn't flow together.

I'm glad you enjoyed that little romantic tidbit. It was the only part of this installment that was easy to write. It just seemed so true to their characters that it was easy to write.