Chapter Seven: Love In The Rain

[melibu7]

Note: Thanks again for the comments, for reading and following this story. Thanks seoulmate for the heads up!

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[babypillow]

thanks for this. i was feeling their lost in the 1st part of the chapter but so glad they made up at everland. hopefully they will realised its good to just leave aside your pride when it comes to love (within reason of course) and be truthful to each other!!

please update soon!

[melibu7]

they have kinda made up but certain things still kinda hanging. thanks for reading :) will try to update soon.

[ext_487567]

dawwwwwwww... wae are you spoiling me too muchie? I get shy... *batting eyelashes* LOL

"like some sexy kind of cobra as they sank deep into the softness of the bed." --- I LIKE THIS!!! cobra... feisty no? LOL

oh and i missed out something... WAE YOU NO GIVE MUCH DETAILS TO YONGYONG'S BARE CHEST?? and i can't believe i missed that detail... hiiiiiing... *bangs head*

*forever trolling in your LJ*

[melibu7]

you know what... i totally forgot abt his bare chest cos i was more interested in his le sexe lips. blame it on this swaggering noonator who keeps on feeding me with photos of that.

btw, thanks!

[lingzw87]

hihi Unnie!!

I love this chapter!!
first the pain n longing they felt when they did not contact for a little more than 5 days...
I love the date in Everland... I love that place went there when I was 12... hahaha I want to go to Korea again!!
but I love their date... his hesitation until he slowly relaxed...
the second was seriously beautiful... the whole scene and the final scene was just beautiful n my mouth was a little dry...
it was just lovely..

looking forward to the next...

ling

[melibu7]

everland looks cool ya? i would love to go there when i go korea :) thanks for reading :)

am looking forward to memory as well :)

[constantia11]

Oh my God. My day has just got better.
Your update is great.
I wonder why even that steamy night had not brought them together.
anyway, I'll be looking forward to ext update.
Well done, Mel!!

[melibu7]

thanks for reading unnie. will try to update soon :)

[eddisontrent]

Waahhh ... Senseless Kissing. M3 was right, we need a category for that. Really love it ... and there are already seven chapters? I think I need to (re?)read the entire thing, really. Liked how they fought and gradually made up. And they characterization was great.

Best regards,
Trent.

[melibu7]

OH hi! thanks for reading. i do hope you like after reading the other chapters. looking forward to both horticulture and your fic with M3.

yup, we definitely have to have a new category for that. the word PG sounds boring LOL