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[melawen_c]

...I don't even have anything useful to say up here. >_> Um, House has been on my mind lately. House and House-related angst. So I re-watched "Moving On" and this happened.

Title: More Important
Pairing: House/Wilson
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,100
Summary: House is always looking for an answer, but can’t always see one.
Warnings: *Spoilers for

Comments

[flywoman]

Wow. You're obviously an experienced writer, but I haven't read anything from you in this fandom before. You've really got House and Wilson down in the dark, brutal way that the end of Season 7 deserves. Kudos! I hope to see more from you!

[melawen_c]

Ugh, yes, this was the season of angst and darkness for more of my fandoms than usual... makes for some good fanfic plotlines, perhaps, but breaks my heart nonetheless. :/

Thanks again, hon!!

[writerdot]

Oh...Oh, ouch. But in a good way.

Everything feels… just as it did before. House isn’t sure if he’s bothered by that or not. Does that mean anything? He thinks if this were more important… if this, if Wilson mattered enough, then things should feel differently now. He should feel differently… shouldn’t he?

He wants it to matter. Is that enough? He’s worried it might not be.

Maybe he’s got it all wrong.

I could feel House's uncertainty here...practically could see the wheels turning in his head. They're both so painfully in character here and it's wonderful.

Really, fantastic job. :-)

[melawen_c]

Thank you so much! I was worried that maybe it was *too* uncertain for House's personality, so I'm really glad you thought it worked. :) Thanks. ♥

[jezziejay]

Absolutely beautifully written. Really, really magnificent!

[melawen_c]

Thank you very much!! I'm glad you thought so.

[lifes_own_light]

Excellent. As others have said, you've nailed the characterizations and the writing itself is quite beautiful. Thanks so much for posting. I'm looking forward to reading more from you in this fandom.

[melawen_c]

I'm very glad you liked it! I haven't written any H/W in a couple years, and I can't promise that I will again any time soon... I'm very hit-and-miss with my fandoms... but, thank you. :)

[cuddyclothes]

To echo the others, excellent. Vivid writing, almost cinematic! And completely IC. The word "dream" is all over your LJ, and I have to say that this almost read like a strange, sad dream.

[melawen_c]

Ah, yes, I do have a fascination with dreams... :) Thank you very much for such lovely comments. ♥