the quiet and the dark

Jan 21, 2010 11:22

Title: The Quiet and the Dark ( Read more... )

supernatural, dean winchester, oneshot, angstbucket, fic, sam winchester

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chiiyo86 January 24 2010, 11:23:34 UTC
This is so quietly painful but beautifully written. I love Sam not turning to look at his brother, and the familiar yet foraign presence of ghost!Dean. Thanks for sharing!

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melanth0 January 24 2010, 21:43:04 UTC
thank you!
I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

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nightporters January 24 2010, 12:08:52 UTC
Oh, this is so dreadfully poignant. Sitting here with tears rolling down my face.

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melanth0 January 24 2010, 21:44:48 UTC
thank you so much!

-gives you a tissue-

<3

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kalliel January 24 2010, 15:37:26 UTC
It’s Dean’s I gotcha, Sammy voice, his trust your big brother and it’ll all work out voice. Only Sam knows it doesn’t all work out, not ever. He can hear the lie buried under that assurance, and right now he’d give anything not to

This part killed me. (Er, pun unintended.) Beautifully written and deeply felt. Lovely work. Thank you for writing it!

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melanth0 January 24 2010, 21:45:45 UTC
hee! It killed you!
(:

thanks so much!

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keerawa January 24 2010, 19:36:06 UTC
What a bitter Hero's reward. Well done.

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melanth0 January 24 2010, 21:46:13 UTC
thank you!

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laru_tan_repus January 25 2010, 05:12:30 UTC
I am HEARTBROKEN. It was terribly sad, and the touch of fear Sam felt at the nothing-after-death afterlife really struck a chord with me, as I have issues with that myself. I do think that it's not a total loss, though - after all, they are TOGETHER in the dark, and as long as they're together, it's all right, you know? @_@ I didn't cry, but I almost did!

Also, congrats on finally posting! :D Brilliant piece to debut with!

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melanth0 January 26 2010, 04:06:49 UTC
I did see this as a happy ending, insofar as a deathfic can have one. I mean, it's not complete oblivion, because Dean could tell that Sam wasn't there. So, you know. together in the dark.

yay! thank you so much!

<3<3<3

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